bethany_shphrd
Oct 15, 2008
Undergraduate / FSU admissions essay- worthy enough to attend Florida State University? [4]
actually- after giving it some thought I thought I would re-work this alittle bit more. Please let me know what you think of it now after using your suggestions and working on the content alittle bit more.
Ok... another revision was done before I am going to send this in today. Can you PLEASE review it before I do?
a few questions:
1- Is it ok that I ask a question at the beginning of the essay or should I take that out?
2- Am I supose to capitalize Vires, Artes, and Mores?
3- Should these 3 words be placed in between quotation marks?
What do you think of the end result after I have worked on it a bit more? Is it worthy of sending in?
Thank you,
Blake
actually- after giving it some thought I thought I would re-work this alittle bit more. Please let me know what you think of it now after using your suggestions and working on the content alittle bit more.
Ok... another revision was done before I am going to send this in today. Can you PLEASE review it before I do?
a few questions:
1- Is it ok that I ask a question at the beginning of the essay or should I take that out?
2- Am I supose to capitalize Vires, Artes, and Mores?
3- Should these 3 words be placed in between quotation marks?
What do you think of the end result after I have worked on it a bit more? Is it worthy of sending in?
Thank you,
Blake