Poetry / Poem about the summer with 5 senses [5]

Hello
I have to write a poem which include the 5 senses and start by ''O'' and follow by ''the'' and a verb which end by ''ing''

It has to be developped and rich.

Here is what I wrote, can you edit it?

Summer
O the talking of birds about the heat of summer mesmerizing (hear)
O the melting ice because of the big fireball in the sky (see)
O the blossoming of flowers tickling our nostrils (smell)
O the melting ice cream in our mouth leaving a sweet taste (taste)
O the blowing wind which makes our hair fly (fell)

Thank you!