Alex G
Jul 21, 2011
Graduate / Personal Statement - for Occupational Therapy Masters Program [3]
Hello everyone, My name is Alex English is my second language and I need assistance with my personal statement for the Occupational Therapy Graduate Program. I would appreciate the help since my entrance into this program means the world to me.
I have started my introduction, and I am aware that this is the one of the most important parts of the essay.
The question is: Why did you choose to pursue a career in Occupational Therapy.
Here is my Intro:
As I sit here and think/ CONTEMPLATE? about the ways which I can express my desire to pursue a career in Occupational Therapy, the answer is complicated/complex? --- a personal experience helped me make the decision, but yet at the same time the answer is also very simple and has always been present in me. I want to be able to make a difference in people's lives.
Please can someone tell me if this is a good intro? I have been stuck here for days!!!
Thank you
Hello everyone, My name is Alex English is my second language and I need assistance with my personal statement for the Occupational Therapy Graduate Program. I would appreciate the help since my entrance into this program means the world to me.
I have started my introduction, and I am aware that this is the one of the most important parts of the essay.
The question is: Why did you choose to pursue a career in Occupational Therapy.
Here is my Intro:
As I sit here and think/ CONTEMPLATE? about the ways which I can express my desire to pursue a career in Occupational Therapy, the answer is complicated/complex? --- a personal experience helped me make the decision, but yet at the same time the answer is also very simple and has always been present in me. I want to be able to make a difference in people's lives.
Please can someone tell me if this is a good intro? I have been stuck here for days!!!
Thank you
