Essays / what to write an essay about "Hope" [4]

thanks for the suggestions.
I'm agree with you, i should change my essay to a narrative.

here is the introduction

I learned about hope after I heard my uncle's story. Someone who has hope will usually continue hoping, although the present gives them no reasons to believe in a good outcome. Hope makes us believe that our goal will be success one day. It makes us have more motivation to achieve our goal. It is a great support which makes us not give up easily, because it makes us believe that all the problems will be better and can be solved. Hope finds out bright lines even in utmost darkness. It lets one to think miracles even in impossible situations. If one cuts off hope, it ultimately cuts off life. Hope makes our life have more motivation to continue and carry on in hard situations.