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Aug 30, 2011
Grammar, Usage / "Furthermore, stating..." - Fragment Sentence? [5]

Thanks matti, I decided to omit "Furthermore" and the sentence would be:

Sullivan points out that every individual should have the right to marry, including homosexuals; stating the unalienable rights of gays as unconstitutional.
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