tanv
Sep 2, 2011
tanv
Sep 1, 2011
Writing Feedback / Technology makes our life to be more convenient and colorful, brings lots of benefits to children [4]
Hi... .Can u guys please grade my essay
Do you think ease does not challenge us and adversity helps us to discover who we are?
Adversity and hardships are what help us to discover who we are.An individual can only pass tenuous claims about his strengths and weaknesses if he/she has not gone through the conventional route or hardships and challenges. In such cases people tend to deceive themselves the most.One may definitely choose ease over hard work as that's the natural human tendency however in today's scenario demands the survival of the fittest.
A very basic example can be our schools.All students are required to write tests in various subjects like maths, science,English etc.Also they are competing with each other at the same time for a good rank.How can a student explore his/her weaknesses and strengths on these subjects and take decisions of their higher education without writing a test?Also, adversity provides a regular motivation to progress in the student's thinking and working progress.
Celebrities like Rihanna ,Akon who have started from a humble background have reached to such heights only due to consistent hard work and adversity.Both of these who are extremely successful started from being an ordinary baby-sitter and convicted respectively with no kind of patronage provided.While the path of ease would have been much smoother they all have chosen hardships and hence are reaping the fruits of their success.
In today's highly competitive world adversity and hardships easy supplant ease.In my opinion its actually a matter of choices for an individual though either way hardships cannot be precluded as with ease comes the great hardship of having satisfaction.This unfortunately doesn't exist much today.However,adversity and hardships make us stronger,more aware about our self and give our thinking and life a much wider horizon whereas ease only adheres to mediocrity.
Hi... .Can u guys please grade my essay
Do you think ease does not challenge us and adversity helps us to discover who we are?
Adversity and hardships are what help us to discover who we are.An individual can only pass tenuous claims about his strengths and weaknesses if he/she has not gone through the conventional route or hardships and challenges. In such cases people tend to deceive themselves the most.One may definitely choose ease over hard work as that's the natural human tendency however in today's scenario demands the survival of the fittest.
A very basic example can be our schools.All students are required to write tests in various subjects like maths, science,English etc.Also they are competing with each other at the same time for a good rank.How can a student explore his/her weaknesses and strengths on these subjects and take decisions of their higher education without writing a test?Also, adversity provides a regular motivation to progress in the student's thinking and working progress.
Celebrities like Rihanna ,Akon who have started from a humble background have reached to such heights only due to consistent hard work and adversity.Both of these who are extremely successful started from being an ordinary baby-sitter and convicted respectively with no kind of patronage provided.While the path of ease would have been much smoother they all have chosen hardships and hence are reaping the fruits of their success.
In today's highly competitive world adversity and hardships easy supplant ease.In my opinion its actually a matter of choices for an individual though either way hardships cannot be precluded as with ease comes the great hardship of having satisfaction.This unfortunately doesn't exist much today.However,adversity and hardships make us stronger,more aware about our self and give our thinking and life a much wider horizon whereas ease only adheres to mediocrity.
