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KYUTYIS   
Sep 7, 2011
Undergraduate / "immigration experience from China to America has influenced me" Princeton Supplement [4]

I truly believe my immigration experience from China to America has a lifelong influence on me. It has broadened my horizon and greatly changed how I approach the world.

When I got off the plane and left San Francisco Airport, I, like a newborn baby, was curious about this new world and looked forward to discovering new things in all aspects of my life. I believed I would change a lot in this new country.

As I arrived in San Francisco on Christmas Day, I saw that a lot of people got together and enjoyed the fireworks at Embarcadero. They talked, sang, and laughed with each other until midnight. What a convivial atmosphere it was! This was my first time experiencing western festivals. After that, I became more willing to learn about western culture and history. I was glad to broaden my knowledge of western society and gradually accepted western culture. Right now, I enjoy celebrating festivals with my native friends.

In the first few weeks after moving to America, I usually spent a lot of time outdoors. I was pleased to find that the drivers were very polite and consciously obeyed traffic rules. When I got on a bus or a Muni, the driver often greeted me with good manners. In addition, when I crossed the streets, the drivers often let me go first though they were in a hurry. I saved plenty of time thanks to the smooth flow of traffic and felt much safer when I crossed the streets. In China, on the contrary, I suffered a lot from traffic jams because the self-serving drivers usually broke traffic rules for convenience and never gave way to pedestrians. After that, I changed myself. I would no longer run across the streets when the traffic light was green and always walked the zebra crossings. Also, I was inspired to become a moral and decent citizen and obey the laws because I realized our society would run more efficiently if everyone did so.

As time went by, I became more familiar with America. One day, on my way to San Francisco Public Library, I was surprised to see hundreds of people protest against state budget cuts near city hall. Some of them shouted loudly, requesting the government to spend more money on education and health care; the others held banners and walked around city hall. The roads were closed, and the police preserved the order. As I grew up in China, I had never seen people demonstrate in the streets. Although sometimes people might get together and try to express their opinion, the police always quickly dispersed the crowd. I thought critical thinking played an important role in America. As I knew, American people had their own ideas and felt free to express them. So this demonstration had a great impact on me. It not only gave me first-hand experience of democracy and freedom but also urged me to develop critical thinking. My thinking mode was completely changed. I thought independently and had my own ideas on world issues instead of just following other people. After watching the news that Chinese lawbreaking merchants added harmful chemicals to improve their products, I censured their behavior and bravely express my opinion on commercial morality; after knowing about Egyptian revolution, I was aware that Chinese people should also stand up and struggle for democracy.

I firmly believe my immigration to America has changed how I approach the world and shaped me into a culturally open-minded and law-abiding person with critical thinking. I think these changes will help me succeed in the future.
KYUTYIS   
Sep 3, 2011
Undergraduate / My Cornell Supplement Essay: College of Art and Science Can Help Me Succeed [3]

College of Art and Science Can Help Me Succeed

I'm interested in mathematics and physics.

When I was young, I have a talent for mathematics. I could quickly worked out arithmetic problems at the age of four. I developed my interest in mathematics by reading various books about mathematics and solving advanced problems. In addition, I loved independently thinking about problems and creating innovative methods. Every time I succefully worked out a difficult problem, I felt excited and triumphant. I think my ambition to solve challenging problems makes mathematics exciting to me.

I was curious about physics when I began studying it. In class, I listened to my teacher carefully and often asked him questions. After class, I usually observed physical phenomena in my daily life and tried to use my knowledge to explain them. Also, I often did physics experiments, observe their phenomena and analyzed the experimental data. Moreover, I attempted to use my mathematical knowledge to understand some physics theories. I gradually developed my interest in physics. In my opinion, there's no doubt that physics experiments and theories make physics exciting to me.

As I know, Cornell is a research university, and College of Art and Science can gives me lots of opportunities to conduct scientific research. I can utilize unparalleled research facilities in the Laboratory of Atomic and Solid State Physics and the Laboratory of Elementary Particle Physics to research on my favorite fields: atomic physics and high-energy partical physics. In this way, I'm able to produce some insightful research papers. Additionally, with the excellent student to teacher ratios in upper level courses, I can share my creative ideas and opinions with my classmates and professors. Also, with the Double Majors program, I can study a double major in mathematics and physics. In my opinion, taking mathematics as my second major can help me learn physics better, especially theoretical physics. I firmly believe that College of Art and Science will help me realize my dream of becoming famous physicist.
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