Undergraduate / 'The field of dentistry' - UVA career possibility relation to course of study [5]

Prompt: How do your possible career or professional plans relate to your planned course of study?
This is a transfer essay for UVA.
Please edit my essay. Also, I know my essay sounds a little boring so if there is any advice, please do tell.

The evolution in science is dependent upon the improvement of procedures and methods. Over the years of my life, I have accumulated a great interest toward the field of science. The unique traits of solutions and the complex chemical reactions within the human bodies have always marveled me. These obsessions toward these fields have eventually drawn me to the discipline of biochemistry.

Biochemistry is at the forefront of the dental field. I want to be involved in research and find a pain-free way of tackling dental decays while reversing the damages of acid attacks. I recently read articles by Science Daily, they discuss how bacteria growths are cause by the formation of acid in the mouth, and I noticed that if we can stop acid from forming, we can stop tooth decay. Major in biochemistry would allow me learn the basic for this research.

UVA's great reputation in the field of biochemistry fits my curricula needs. I'm particularly impressed with the college's specialization in ACS certification and research programs. The research on infectious diseases and organisms would help understand my field of interest while ACS-certified would create leverage for institutions and other external agencies.

Before learning to walk, one must learn to crawl. Similarly, I'm at a point where I must expand and break the life's thorn to continue onto my field of studies. My passion in the field of dentistry involves the area of science. Biochemistry wide topics in matter and organisms combine my required science and prepare me for dental school.