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Posts by brohammer26
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brohammer26   
Nov 12, 2011
Writing Feedback / One man's terrorist is another's freedom fighter [3]

Thanks for the response, I ended up doing well on the overall exam. This was 1 of 4 questions. I wanted to add a couple of sentances at the end but ran out of space as each questions was only allowed 2 pages.
brohammer26   
Nov 1, 2011
Graduate / 'highly ranked for Mechanical Engineering studies' - SOP For M.Sc. in penn. state [4]

My aspiration for more knowledge soared when I got employed with Lagos State University in Nigeria, where I work in a maintenance capacity.

I would change 'I got employed' to 'when I started empoloyment for(or when I was hired for)...'. where I currently work in a maintenance capacity. I think there are quite a few more things that can be changed around. I would get some more eyes on it before sending the final in. The content is very good, just needs some polishing. You may want to simplify some of your sentances as they sound to wordy. EF Kevin provides a great ex with the first sentance as I was thinking the same thing.
brohammer26   
Nov 1, 2011
Essays / How to write an argumentative essay about global warming? Need a good topic. [7]

Look up the Ingovernmental panel on climate change (IPCC) in google scholar or if you have access to a scholary library. Are you looking for a specific disaster? Or are you looking for the validity of global warming? Think about hurricanes, tornadoes, glacier melt, sea level rising, coastal erosion, wildfires, floods etc etc. Look at the last 30-40 years. There is a ton of things that you can write on and a lot of information out there on it. Try to stick to scientific facts from valid resoruces and stay away from the political junk. best of luck!
brohammer26   
Nov 1, 2011
Essays / i need to write an essay about my goals in future [5]

I think a cool way to start the intro would be a vision of what your ideal life will be like when your goals have been met...and then transition with a..this is how I am going to make this real..or something like that. The whole point of the intro is to hook the reader. Your body should be the steps that you are going to take make this happen. Talk about why you are doing it and how it will be done. The conclusion should reiterate the previous 2 paragraphs.

Oh yeah and Zeid people are not going to write this for you. How do you expect to accomplish these goals in life if you are asking people to write an essay for you? You have to go through the dirt like everyone else..nothing is wrong with a little advice, but don't look for the easy way out. Also I dont beleive this type of essay would have a thesis unless it is a requirement becuase it is a narrative essay. If it is required you could research some sorts of tenets or methods from theories that will help you reach your goals. Use a central theme from those tenets/theories to write your thesis statement. Best of luck and keep at it.
brohammer26   
Oct 31, 2011
Writing Feedback / One man's terrorist is another's freedom fighter [3]

Feedback for final--essay question. 'One Man's terroist is another's freedom fighter'

It has been stated that "one person's terrorist is another's freedom fighter." Assess this statement and write an essay about a specific terrorist group. Who supports this group and for what reasons. Who sees the group as a terrorist organization and for what reasons?

The definitions between a terrorist group and a freedom fighter significantly change justifications and perceptions of armed movements. Boaz Ganor explains that supporters of armed movements label their people as some variation of freedom fighters, so the ends justify the means and elicit further support.1 Ganor defines terrorism as, "the deliberate use or the threat to use violence against civilians in order to attain political, ideological and religious aims."2 While the end goal for a freedom fighter may be perceived as a relative legitimate purpose; it is the means that draws the question. With a terrorist group like Hezbollah that has used terrorism and other forms of asymmetric warfare, how can it be labeled one or the other? Ganor states that, "A terrorist organization can also be a movement of national liberation, and the concepts of 'terrorist' and 'freedom fighter' are not mutually contradictory."3

Hezbollah's formation began in the latter 1970's through the early 1980's. Krista Wiegand explains that, "Hezbollah's founding in 1982 began as part of a general social protest movement of Shi'a Muslims inspired by Islamist clerics in Lebanon and the success of the Iranian revolution in 1979. The group's initial identity was an armed militia actively involved in the Lebanese civil war fighting against other Lebanese militias and against Israeli occupation of pars of Lebanon."4 According to Israel News, "Its principal tenets were and remain: the establishment of an Islamic state modeled after Iran, independence from Western powers and an uncompromising resistance to Zionism."5 During the early 1980's at the start of the Lebanon war, Hezbollah carried about multiple terrorist acts as practiced jihad and was listed as a terrorist organization among the U.S., Israel and several other allies. With U.S. being a mediator during the war, Americans became a target for terrorism. Some of the acts were to include attacks and kidnappings on US and European journalists, as well as the U.S. embassy and barracks bombing in Beirut with high fatalities.6 According to Wiegand, "Hezbollah is also suspected of the hijacking of TWA flight 857 in June 1985, intended to release 766 Lebanese prisoners held in Israel.7 It is easy to see why the US and allies have labeled Hezbollah as a terrorist organization.

Hezbollah has significant support from Iran and some support from Syria. At the uprising of Hezbollah, Iran was known to support the movement by providing training from the Islamic Revolutionary Guard Corps (IRGC).8 Iran and Hezbollah share similar Shi'a ideologies. Wiegand explains that, "The relationship between Hezbollah and Iran seemed like a natural fit due to their shared belief in the justification of the jurist-theologian-the Ayatollah Khomeini himself, shared Islamic principles, and the same views toward liberation movements and rejection of Israeli occupation of certain territories."9 Iran believes that Hezbollah's acts are legitimate, and uses them to have influence in the region and Israel. Syria stared as a mediator to transfer IRGC troops from Iran to Lebanon. Since then Syria has engaged closer political ties because of similar views on Israel. Wiegand states, "Bashar al-Assad has continued his father's policy toward Hezbollah's resistance against Israel, considered to be a legitimate cause."10

1 Ganor, Boaz., "Defining Terrorism: Is One Man's Terrorist Another Man's Freedom Fighter," Police Practice & Research 3, no. 4
2 Ibid., 288
3 Ganor, Boaz., 293
4 Wiegand, Krista E., "Reformation of a Terrorist Group: Hezbollah as a Lebanese Political Party," Studies in Conflict & Terrorism 32, no.8
5 "Hezbollah, the 'Party of God'," Israel News: Ynetnews
6 Wiegand, Krista E., 672
7 Ibid., 672
8 Ibid., 671
9 Ibid., 671
10 Ibid., 671
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