Kohana
Nov 8, 2011
Writing Feedback / The Old & New Testament - Compare/contrast Paragraph [3]
thank you.... Now I, need some help the contrast ending.
thank you.... Now I, need some help the contrast ending.
Kohana
Nov 6, 2011
Writing Feedback / receive the best direction and education from their parents as well as teachers [5]
Parents have a huge impact on the life of their children, and also whole the greatest influences of their children life.
Parents have a huge impact on the life of their children, and also whole the greatest influences of their children life.
Kohana
Nov 6, 2011
Writing Feedback / The Old & New Testament - Compare/contrast Paragraph [3]
The Old & New Testament
The Bible Old and New Testament, The entire Bible is our instruction manual, about our life here on earth, and what is expected after death. Although one book, the bible was divided in two parts, the Old Testament. Which tells us about the beginning of the world, and the creation of mankind. The New Testament, which tells us about how we should live our lives today, and how this world will come to an end.
The Old & New Testament
The Bible Old and New Testament, The entire Bible is our instruction manual, about our life here on earth, and what is expected after death. Although one book, the bible was divided in two parts, the Old Testament. Which tells us about the beginning of the world, and the creation of mankind. The New Testament, which tells us about how we should live our lives today, and how this world will come to an end.
