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Dec 3, 2008
Writing Feedback / "The insight of AIDS disease" - essay [5]
It is great essay. The writer described the definition of AIDS at the 1st paragraph and the reasons to get the infection at 2nd paragraph with examples. Also, the conclusion was well organized to summarize writer's stance.
It is great essay. The writer described the definition of AIDS at the 1st paragraph and the reasons to get the infection at 2nd paragraph with examples. Also, the conclusion was well organized to summarize writer's stance.
