Undergraduate / 'future is the main issue' - stanford ... what matters to u & y ? [19]

What really stands out to me is the Thomas Edison quote. It's a bit cliche. Maybe find another one?

Writing Feedback / 'a guideline should be provided to students' - Cambridge 5 task 2 [2]

I corrected a few of your grammatical errors. If you don't mind me asking, you're just learning English, right? I think you've got a good starting belief. And you're discussing the advantages like they ask, but you still need to write about the cons. Use some better diction too.

Essays / Davidson Supplement Essay - unclear about what to write. Advice? [3]

If they're specifically referring to the Honor Code, they're going to want you to give it some praise. It's important for them so give it some consideration in your essay. A majority of your essay should focus on who you are and how that fits into the mission statement of Davidson. Make sure you talk about specific programs at Davidson.