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milamiyamiila   
Jan 8, 2012
Essays / Design of newly constructed buildings - need ideas about a topic [4]

if it is historic part of the city then of course building should be monitored as it can damage importan historic buildins
then imagine a building which has only two or three stores and to build in such a district a high buildings and tourist will not have see it
milamiyamiila   
Jan 1, 2012
Writing Feedback / Improving standards of living of developing countries through education? [2]

12. Education is the single most important factor in the development of a developing country. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (Passport to Ielts)

I cannot totally agree that education is the only way for developing countries to improve their standards of living. Undoubtedly, education plays a crucial role both in the society and in the economy of any country. However, there are also several aspects which influence on development of the third world countries.

A lot of economists and scientist claim that economical and social well-being of any state depend on education, rooting out corruption, state of peace and good diplomatic relations with other countries.

In my opinion, education is not able to help to solve all problems facing developing countries, as demonstrated by republics of former Soviet Union or in other words Commonwealth of Independent States . Almost 99 per cent of adult and working-age population is literate and numerate. Former Soviet Republics have got the best system of education in the world. Students at school are broadly educated and the curriculums both at school and universities are very rich. Addition, there are world famous universities such as Lomonosov University, MIFI whose graduates are Nobel laureates. Nevertheless, one of the highest educational standards , most population of these countries hardly make ends meet and the minimum subsistence level is low.

In my view, that the main hindrance in developing Countries of Commonwealth of Independent States economies of is corruption. Moreover, some countries of these Republics are at war which also prevents their progress in the economy.

To summarize, education is a key factor which can stimulate the development of any country but at the same time there must be any wars, corruption must be uprooted, and good diplomatic relations must be settled.
milamiyamiila   
Dec 14, 2011
Writing Feedback / Ielts 'fast food is becoming more and more popular even though it's junk' [4]

lease can you check my composition. thanks everybody

In recent years, fast food is becoming more and more popular although many medical tests prove that it can harm our health greatly. Many scientist through mass media encourage people to abstain from fast food as it contains fats which can cause cancer, obesity and other serious diseases. It is claimed that fast food even can cause an addiction especially if a person is getting used to it since childhood.

In my opinion, firstly, people prefer eating in a fast food restaurants because the food there is very delicious. Companies providing fast food add different condiments to their product to improve taste and which are even created in special laboratories supported by them and cannot be bought in usual markets.

Secondly, you do not need to spend time on cooking. Many people have to work long hours and after arduous working days they are too exhausted to cook or sometimes it may happen that you are simply in a bad mood for cooking.

Thirdly, fast food is much cheaper than restaurants and you do not have to wait for a waiter to serve you and to pay tips. Moreover, the environment in fast food restaurants more friendly and relaxed and many entertainments are created for children who become additive to fast food and in the future it will take much efforts from their side to overcome the habit of eating fast food.

In my view, in order to solve this problem subsidized canteens should be build and more propaganda to be spread to people about benefits of natural food.

As for me, I prefer eating in and cooking myself, but I must admit that several times I ate in fast food restaurants because I was too hungry and had no time for cooking .
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