Writing Feedback / TOPIC:Why do we need to learn english [2]

Today, there are many people all of the world study English. Most of people think that maybe english becomes their second language. But have you ever wondered:" Why do we need to learn English". Why don't we searching about it?

First, English helps you to improve friendship and maybe include our knowledge around the world. Nowadays, many people have a wider friendship around the world. So learning English is an important way to communicate with friends from another countries. Absolutely, learning English can help you to make more friends, we can exchange with a lot of people, improve our relationships. From that, we can learn more, open our knowledge world. Every year, there are lots of teenagers go overseas to learn for themselves, to improve every important, to bring every new thing from another countries to our country.

Second, English helps you to connect our country to the world or we can learn more about another countries's tradition. Learning English, we can introduce every beautiful things, places,... to internaional friends from another countries. Foreigners wil be curious and they will travel to our country. On the contrary, we can understand more special traditional foods, cultures,... from another countries. I think it's great so we need to learn English

Finally, we can find jobsmore easily. Today, all companies need their wokers know at least on language, especially English. In some international companies, every person have to know English well. So we need to learn English in other to have a good job for you.

You can see. Learning is very important way to climb on our future stepladder. I hope that people wil learn English for themselves and for their future

Writing Feedback / Topic:"Why do we need to read books" [6]

Today, there are many clubs for some readers, for every who loves books or wants to read books. But have you ever asked somebody that why we need to read books? Before answer this question, why don't you find out what are the benefits of reading books. Let's check it out.

First, reading books helps you to widen your general knowledge. Nowadays, the world is changing every single day, every single night and turns around on a time wheel.All things you learn at school are all enough? No! everything you learn at school just a general education. At school, teacher can not teach thoroughly for you just in one class. So you need to read books to improve yourself. Knowledge is unlimited and you are standing between the world of education. Reading books also helps us to remember clearly about the situation or the unit you have learned at school. For example, in biology, at school, we learned about animals 's habits and when read books, you can understand more about animals world, or in chemistry, you can understand clearly about chemicals or atomic. In the other side, the world has a lot of books, maybe a thousand or a billion. So we can choose books with different topics for reading. Some people like romantic books. But some people love science, like me. in science book, you can know more about the wide world outside your imaginary. You can learn more abot animals, the situations about us.

Second, reading books helps you to understand how is the world inside people. Many books have a lot of stories about family, relationship, friendship or maybe about love. From that, we can learn more about the inside world of people. For instance, nobody's boy written by hector malot is a novel talking about a boy has no family go every with an old men to perform juggling with three dogs. A novel is a present about love between two people in a small family.

Finally, reading books helps us to relax, feel every moment times with your books. There are many books are published to attend for entertainment like doraemon, Sherlock Holmes or Harry Potter or some books make you to be sunk in the adventures, unreal world like pendragon or Indiana Jones. Reading is fun.

You can see. Reading books is an important way to step on step on your life. You can see the world, listen to the world. Your life will be more suitable.