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Posts by jbauer
Joined: Dec 16, 2011
Last Post: Dec 22, 2011
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jbauer   
Dec 22, 2011
Undergraduate / 'My sister and I were born in Morocco' - Letter of special circumstances for college [15]

I understand it is a letter of special circumstances and I feel for you. I think it was written well, however you might want to re-think the sentence at the end: "you hold my life, my future, in your hands." I think it might be a little too much. It would end just as well if you removed it.

This is only my opinion. Good luck and God bless.
jbauer   
Dec 17, 2011
Undergraduate / "Oregonians" + "Practicality" - University of Rochester Supplements [2]

I think your answer to #2 was spot on, however I don't think you answered the actual question for #1. I may be wrong but I think you need to answer more specifically how it describes you and why you will excel at Rochester.

I struggled terrible with mine as well...The answers I received on here helped. I wish you the same luck!

Take care and good luck!
jbauer   
Dec 17, 2011
Undergraduate / Personal Essay Regarding the importance of Speech Pathology in our increasing society [5]

My youngest son has struggled his entire life with a speech and language disabilty. I can not tell you how wonderful it was to read your essay and know that there are people out there pursuing this extremely UNDERRATED disability. People do not realize how much speech and language affects your every day, almost every moment of your life.

Your essay was wonderful and I wish you the very BEST of luck and happiness.

From: A mother of a son who struggles!
jbauer   
Dec 16, 2011
Undergraduate / Several Design School Admin Essay [3]

I've had a love for the visual arts for as long as I can remember. Growing up with a speech, language and non-specific learning disability has always made verbal communication a daily challenge. As a young child, it was difficult to verbalize my feelings and/or thoughts; I learned to speak in other ways. As early as age five, my moods were expressed through my own sense of style by insisting on dressing myself for school or reorganizing my room. Even as my verbal skills strengthened, I continued to express myself through some sort of art form like fashion or design.

My maternal grandmother was also a great artistic influence. She worked in one form of the field of art or another her entire life. Retired from hairdressing, she is now a 3-D art teacher for senior citizens. Early on, she started teaching me everything she knew and supporting my need for my own artistic expression.

Holidays were always an extra special time for my grandmother and I. We would spend hours decorating our houses. Each holiday my love for fashion collided with my passion to decorate. Eventually I realized my calling was to become an Interior Designer.

Having a learning disability has caused many struggles in my life, however it has also given me the ability to plan with a purpose of achieving my goals. At this point in my life my next step is setting to achieve on of the most important goals that will ultimately affect the rest of my life- my career in design.

I will utilize my creativity, strong work ethics and my ability to turn my attention to aesthetics in order to achieve this goal. My strengths, along with high level of education offered by attending Pratt Institute, I believe I can attain this goal and fulfill my dreams at the same time.
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