Ninja Duck
Dec 18, 2011
Undergraduate / Purdue Essay - Aeronautical Engineering [8]
I added a paragraph about my strengths, replacing the one about physics and whatnot, more criticism would be appreciated.
Is it good? Does it need more work? Will I be able to send this off soon?
I consider myself a quick and comprehensive learner, able to absorb the most complex ideas and apply them with ease; I was able to erect a functional computer from scratch with little practical experience, relying only on my theoretical knowledge. I enjoy a challenge, which is why I opted for advanced science courses and an optional, self-study, advanced psychology course. I'm a very avid reader and intellectual pursuer, if one took a look at my bookshelf; they would find lots of thriller and adventure books, mixed with educational books and encyclopaedias, ready to draw me into their pages and make me lost in a sea of words.
I added a paragraph about my strengths, replacing the one about physics and whatnot, more criticism would be appreciated.
Is it good? Does it need more work? Will I be able to send this off soon?
I consider myself a quick and comprehensive learner, able to absorb the most complex ideas and apply them with ease; I was able to erect a functional computer from scratch with little practical experience, relying only on my theoretical knowledge. I enjoy a challenge, which is why I opted for advanced science courses and an optional, self-study, advanced psychology course. I'm a very avid reader and intellectual pursuer, if one took a look at my bookshelf; they would find lots of thriller and adventure books, mixed with educational books and encyclopaedias, ready to draw me into their pages and make me lost in a sea of words.