Undergraduate / 'it was unique and had more to offer' -Why did you choose Swarthmore? [3]

great job...try to talk about specific clubs and organizations at Swarthmore that may have also influenced you to want to go there!!!

Undergraduate / 'Muslims are kind people' - a perspective I will contribute to Rice [4]

This is great just try to condense the introduction and talk more about your perspectives and how your cultural experiences will help shape you into a productive citizen not only for yourself but for others as well!! Great job