Undergraduate / 'direction for the future' - Common app number 1, peer leaderhship! [2]

Overall, this is a good essay, but there's something abstract: "many new experience" "significant experience"
You should make them more concrete:)

Undergraduate / 'I always wear a purple hat' - Johns hopkins supplement #2 [19]

i love your essay! That's very good:)

thank you for your reading my essay!