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angiepie   
Jan 4, 2012
Undergraduate / 'Education cannot be taken from you' - HOWARD PERSONAL STATEMENT [4]

i ALSO NEED HELP CHOOSING A TOPIC. wHAT TOPIC DO YOU FEEL WOULD BEST SUIT THIS ESSAY. dOES THIS ESSAY FLOW TOGETHER? TELL ME WHAT YOU GET OUT OF IT.THANKS!!!! :)

Howard University is interested in you as a person, as well as how you think and express your thoughts. Please submit with your application a 500- word essay on a topic of your choice. If you wish, you may also submit a resume of your academic achievements and extracurricular activities.

How has education affected you?

My grandfather, an educator for over 30 years, has always told me that your education is one thing that cannot be taken from you. Therefore it is valuable, should be taken seriously, and not for granted. Being raised solely by my grandparents for the first 7 years of my life has had a great impact on me and the choices that I have made. It is no coincidence that their positive influence continues to shape the person I am today. Since my mother had me at 17, my grandparents stepped in to raise me while she went to college to pursue her undergraduate degree and then on to earn her master's degree. As a child, I was able to watch my mom make the difficult sacrifice of leaving me in the capable hands of her parents, so that she could achieve her educational goals and provide a promising future for me. It is because of her sacrifice that I have been able to stay focused and handle a rigorous curriculum while pursuing dance and having a part time job. I realize the importance of education because of the values that my family has instilled in me; and since mediocrity has never been an option, I have always tried to put my best foot forward.

As an ambassador for my high school and community while reigning as Miss Pebblebrook , I sought to find the qualities of an effective leader. In this role, I served as a mentor to young ladies and spoke to them about time management, etiquette, public speaking, and how to best present yourself in an interview. These are skills I learned as a sophomore by participating in the "Saturdays with My State Representative" Program led by Georgia State Representative, Alisha Thomas Morgan. This program was instrumental in showing me that a leader has integrity, is confident, and serves as an inspiration to those around them. I immediately used my interviewing skills to apply for a job at Chick-fil-A restaurant, where I have been employed for the past 2 years. By working part-time and being in school, my time-management skills are of the utmost importance in succeeding academically.

In closing, I feel that Howard is a place where continuing my education will allow me to empower and motivate others to do the same. My devotion to education is a trait that has given me strength to take hold of my dreams and pursue them no matter what.
angiepie   
Jan 4, 2012
Undergraduate / 'help of great faculty members' - why franklin and marshall [7]

"It is easy to fall into the "trap" of Franklin and Marshall College. When I first found F&M on a blog, I was mesmerized. Underneath the azure sky, a squirrel is bathing in the sun on the beautiful path dressed with colorful fallen leaves. Undoubtedly, it was a dreamland, a fairy tale, an epitome of a teenage girl's fantasy."

you could cmbine the2nd and 3rd sentence by saying "When I first found F&M on a blog I was mesmerized BY the azure..." and so on..

just a suggestion other than that really good essay
angiepie   
Jan 2, 2012
Undergraduate / Supplement Essay on a Bad Decision. (I chose a bad haircut) [3]

I would be careful to mention "Seventeen Magazine" if you are going to, later, blame them for your mistake. It can come off as if you do not take responsibility for your own actions. That would be my note overall just to make it seem like you mad a bad choice and instead of bring sad or angry about it you looked at the situation optimistically and not dwell o the ad stuff. Otherwise very well written and your illustrations are clear.

Also when you said you did not want to go to the middle school social because of your hair can read as self-centered or dramatic, not that you are it just may come off that
angiepie   
Jan 2, 2012
Undergraduate / My obsession with giraffes(UGA ESSAY) [8]

Tell us an interesting or amusing story about yourself that you have not already shared in your application. (200 Word Limit)

I am a little obsessed with giraffes...okay I am VERY obsessed with giraffes. Beyond the giraffe shirts, toys, necklaces and trinkets, I have found a true appreciation for the species as it has brought me to think of beauty in different ways other than the obvious. The long neck and lanky limbs of giraffe are quite uncommon among many animals yet their features strongly resemble my tall and limber body frame. As an adolescent, I wondered how my body turned out this way when all of the other girls around me were short and petite. Determined to find answers, my curiosity eventually landed me at a casting call for a modeling agency in Atlanta.I remember being surrounded by so many other 'giraffes ' who gave me insight as to what beauty can be. Not all of the models had the same hair, same eyes, same skin color which made the experience an amazing eye opener. Since then I have looked at not only models but everyone as a unique individual and furthermore embraced my own physique. The inspiration which stemmed from my admiration of giraffes become far more than a simple obsession but a peace of mind.
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