valsaviera
Jan 8, 2012
Undergraduate / 'I looked at rankings' - SANTA CLARA short prompt [3]
i agree with unwana11
i think that you have a really good essay here...
i agree with unwana11
i think that you have a really good essay here...
valsaviera
Jan 8, 2012
Undergraduate / 'my major weakness is academic' - Howard App Essay [6]
First like me, you also write longs paragraphs(the 2nd) you need to work more there...
I really like your essay, and you should make a conclusion...
i hope it helps :)
First like me, you also write longs paragraphs(the 2nd) you need to work more there...
I really like your essay, and you should make a conclusion...
i hope it helps :)
valsaviera
Jan 7, 2012
Scholarship / 'to be mentally healthy' - my personal characteristics and accomplishments [6]
ok thanks for your help
i will make another... :)
ok thanks for your help
i will make another... :)
valsaviera
Jan 7, 2012
Scholarship / 'to be mentally healthy' - my personal characteristics and accomplishments [6]
I have a test of scholarship in which I am asked to describe in my words(200 to 300) to my personal characteristics and achievements.
I made many sketches, but I feel that this is better than others, but still want to enlist the help of you.
Any suggestions will be welcome.
Thank you
I am a person who likes to be mentally healthy, have a self-esteem every day I wake up, look presentable, talk to people and share ideas make me feel good, I try to always be enthusiastic, act according to my principles when I want something I struggle to get, disorganization is something that does not taste at all, I am a happy person but not every day I wake up in a good mood.
In free time I entertain myself reading books, magazines, watching television, on the weekends going to the movies with friends or in family living, I am a versatile, extracurricular activities such as theater, dance, lectures and study groups and I participate.
I have achieved a lot in school, I think this is the place that provides motivation and experience fruitful and improved quality of the person.
The personal accomplishments that i am grateful to have acquired, are the diplomas of merit that i received for five years and also my test results from the twelfth grade.
Last year I did a study of biology in the group after a long time, while working many things not go well.
The work was worth half of the quarter note, my colleagues were sloppy, I had to do everything on my own, I was terrified at the idea of defending a work in front of 40 people, as the days went i was stressed out and cried because i knew it would be a disaster and would leave many people dissapointed.
The presention day my self esteem was low, my teammates were unprepared. The presentation was not as good, and things got worse in the defense.
I have a test of scholarship in which I am asked to describe in my words(200 to 300) to my personal characteristics and achievements.
I made many sketches, but I feel that this is better than others, but still want to enlist the help of you.
Any suggestions will be welcome.
Thank you
I am a person who likes to be mentally healthy, have a self-esteem every day I wake up, look presentable, talk to people and share ideas make me feel good, I try to always be enthusiastic, act according to my principles when I want something I struggle to get, disorganization is something that does not taste at all, I am a happy person but not every day I wake up in a good mood.
In free time I entertain myself reading books, magazines, watching television, on the weekends going to the movies with friends or in family living, I am a versatile, extracurricular activities such as theater, dance, lectures and study groups and I participate.
I have achieved a lot in school, I think this is the place that provides motivation and experience fruitful and improved quality of the person.
The personal accomplishments that i am grateful to have acquired, are the diplomas of merit that i received for five years and also my test results from the twelfth grade.
Last year I did a study of biology in the group after a long time, while working many things not go well.
The work was worth half of the quarter note, my colleagues were sloppy, I had to do everything on my own, I was terrified at the idea of defending a work in front of 40 people, as the days went i was stressed out and cried because i knew it would be a disaster and would leave many people dissapointed.
The presention day my self esteem was low, my teammates were unprepared. The presentation was not as good, and things got worse in the defense.
valsaviera
Jan 7, 2012
Undergraduate / 'Judo teacher ' - school or summer activity [6]
I liked the introduction although I think that you should explore more, but the body and conclusion are very interesting
I hope it helps you :)
I liked the introduction although I think that you should explore more, but the body and conclusion are very interesting
I hope it helps you :)
valsaviera
Jan 7, 2012
Undergraduate / 'Cycling' - Extracurricular activity [3]
I could not agree more ...
I think you should mention how cycling makes you as an individual, and how it will help you to achieve other objectives, and you could also mention that you attended any club or would like to attend
I could not agree more ...
I think you should mention how cycling makes you as an individual, and how it will help you to achieve other objectives, and you could also mention that you attended any club or would like to attend
valsaviera
Jan 5, 2012
Scholarship / Education and career plans - Starting an essay of 300 words for a scholarship [6]
They also asked to describe my personal characteristics and achievements, here is a test and look forward to your help. thk u
I am a sociable person, consistent, creative, open-minded, humble, strict with myself, I am willing to try new things and not afraid to take risks, I am highly motivated and enthusiastic and have a deep desire to continually update my knowledge and skills, have the ability to work individually and collectively and I'm motivated to continue to develop my professional skills and educational future, I am outgoing and determined individual, I am able to maintain a balanced attitude of the school and family life by giving special attention to things that matter at home and at school.
and someone can give me an example of that are personal achievements?
They also asked to describe my personal characteristics and achievements, here is a test and look forward to your help. thk u
I am a sociable person, consistent, creative, open-minded, humble, strict with myself, I am willing to try new things and not afraid to take risks, I am highly motivated and enthusiastic and have a deep desire to continually update my knowledge and skills, have the ability to work individually and collectively and I'm motivated to continue to develop my professional skills and educational future, I am outgoing and determined individual, I am able to maintain a balanced attitude of the school and family life by giving special attention to things that matter at home and at school.
and someone can give me an example of that are personal achievements?
valsaviera
Jan 5, 2012
Scholarship / Education and career plans - Starting an essay of 300 words for a scholarship [6]
I am applying for a scholarship to deliver the next week and ask me in 300 words to describe my plans to my relationship with the educational and career goals and i dont know where and how to start.
Can someone give me some tips?
I am applying for a scholarship to deliver the next week and ask me in 300 words to describe my plans to my relationship with the educational and career goals and i dont know where and how to start.
Can someone give me some tips?
valsaviera
Jan 5, 2012
Scholarship / Education and career plans - Starting an essay of 300 words for a scholarship [6]
And do not intend to work in this area for over 20 years, I would start my own company Pastry which is another passion I have always enjoyed making new dishes for the family and friends then decided that I would also like to improve in this area after my degree I would like to take a course in professional cooking and slowly build my own business.
now I do not know if that last part should be in the middle of the test or if it's good to stay at last, because they also require future plans, then count on your help ...
And do not intend to work in this area for over 20 years, I would start my own company Pastry which is another passion I have always enjoyed making new dishes for the family and friends then decided that I would also like to improve in this area after my degree I would like to take a course in professional cooking and slowly build my own business.
now I do not know if that last part should be in the middle of the test or if it's good to stay at last, because they also require future plans, then count on your help ...
valsaviera
Jan 5, 2012
Scholarship / Education and career plans - Starting an essay of 300 words for a scholarship [6]
I followed your advice and I have here a sample of what I wrote.
thank you :)
One of my passion is for genuine chemistry, especially chemical
organic and nothing would make me happy explore and work in this
area.
I intend to become an engineering specialist
petroleum and my dream is long term. My motivation for
degree is my thirst for knowledge and my desire to
contribute to the growth and development of my country and complete
my goals, since it still has a shortage of professionals
formed in this area with a stable economy and my parents could
invest more in training in this area.
In five years I intend to be able, to gain more skills and
my knowledge, and complete my degree and join the
labor market as soon as possible.
Ten years from now I want to be achieved, working in a company
known as Halliburton or Chevron and gain a position of the direitora
Department of Marketing and Exploration of the product but without causing
damage to the environment, or even environmental consulting.
And to achieve those objectives I would like to graduate from
petroleum engineering, although this choice seems unusual, I
I think it will enable me to be one of the best in the business.
So I think being chosen as a recipient of this scholarship would be
a large and important door to meet my goals.
I followed your advice and I have here a sample of what I wrote.
thank you :)
One of my passion is for genuine chemistry, especially chemical
organic and nothing would make me happy explore and work in this
area.
I intend to become an engineering specialist
petroleum and my dream is long term. My motivation for
degree is my thirst for knowledge and my desire to
contribute to the growth and development of my country and complete
my goals, since it still has a shortage of professionals
formed in this area with a stable economy and my parents could
invest more in training in this area.
In five years I intend to be able, to gain more skills and
my knowledge, and complete my degree and join the
labor market as soon as possible.
Ten years from now I want to be achieved, working in a company
known as Halliburton or Chevron and gain a position of the direitora
Department of Marketing and Exploration of the product but without causing
damage to the environment, or even environmental consulting.
And to achieve those objectives I would like to graduate from
petroleum engineering, although this choice seems unusual, I
I think it will enable me to be one of the best in the business.
So I think being chosen as a recipient of this scholarship would be
a large and important door to meet my goals.
valsaviera
Jan 4, 2012
Scholarship / Education and career plans - Starting an essay of 300 words for a scholarship [6]
I am applying for a scholarship to deliver the next week and ask me in 300 words to describe my plans to my relationship with the educational and career goals.
Can someone give me some tips?
I am applying for a scholarship to deliver the next week and ask me in 300 words to describe my plans to my relationship with the educational and career goals.
Can someone give me some tips?
