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Jan 9, 2012
Writing Feedback / 'parents have the main duty of teaching their kids' - Cambridge IELTS [3]
Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affects the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
A considerable jump in the communication technology was taken place in the 1950 or so, and socialists believe that proposed contributions aim at changing human life style from two sides. The glamorous side is easing communication through facilities in the cyber world which, in my opinion, overshadows the sensible human relationships, and causes new psychological and social problems to bring into focus.
Initially, in modern universe, the way people use to interact with each other has changed thanks to considerable jump in the communication technology. This invaluable growth leads many governments to implement different aspects of cyber life in their society so as to decrease the cost of living. A good example would be the Japanese society in which people visit many shops, do their purchases, pay the bills, share their knowledge, and communicate with their friends in audio/visual manner overseas in the virtual world by pressing a few keys, while they have their coffee in situation in which they lie on a comfortable sofa. Hence, it is worth mentioning that technical communications bring many benefits for today's society which makes living easier than one could imagine.
Nonetheless, socialist and psychologist have many concerns about this kind of relationships people make. Cybercrime, as a child of technology, causes modern societies facing severe and unsolvable problems. Researches show that rate of cybercrime dramatically increases in a same line with the change of technology. My experience shows that many people just do their works online without taking preventing actions into place. They use a physical keyboard instead of virtual keyboard to enter their credit card information, and a thief easily decodes the signals to use the credit card illegally. Therefore, social and economical disorders are the biggest problems that today society faces.
Psychologists of Oxford University study social disabilities to which modern communicational technology may lead. They have observed the treatments of 50 kids who have touched all kinds of cyber facilities and modern technologies during their growth. After 20 years of living and communicating in virtual world, these teenagers lack the capability of doing team works, and staying in touch with other people, because they have never sensed the joy real world relationship. These psychologists survey that those people who involves in computer generated communication more than usual will decidedly forget the real life communication, and cannot take after their family and themselves adequately. Therefore, this kind of virtual relationships people make not only causes many psychological disorders, but also make doing social behavior for human difficult.
To summarize this essay, it should be noted that although technology makes living easy, and has many economical, communicational, environmental benefits, it knows as the root of many social and psychological problems. Therefore, it is the main duty of governments to establish a trade of between real and virtual relationships so as to make society a better place for living.
Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affects the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
A considerable jump in the communication technology was taken place in the 1950 or so, and socialists believe that proposed contributions aim at changing human life style from two sides. The glamorous side is easing communication through facilities in the cyber world which, in my opinion, overshadows the sensible human relationships, and causes new psychological and social problems to bring into focus.
Initially, in modern universe, the way people use to interact with each other has changed thanks to considerable jump in the communication technology. This invaluable growth leads many governments to implement different aspects of cyber life in their society so as to decrease the cost of living. A good example would be the Japanese society in which people visit many shops, do their purchases, pay the bills, share their knowledge, and communicate with their friends in audio/visual manner overseas in the virtual world by pressing a few keys, while they have their coffee in situation in which they lie on a comfortable sofa. Hence, it is worth mentioning that technical communications bring many benefits for today's society which makes living easier than one could imagine.
Nonetheless, socialist and psychologist have many concerns about this kind of relationships people make. Cybercrime, as a child of technology, causes modern societies facing severe and unsolvable problems. Researches show that rate of cybercrime dramatically increases in a same line with the change of technology. My experience shows that many people just do their works online without taking preventing actions into place. They use a physical keyboard instead of virtual keyboard to enter their credit card information, and a thief easily decodes the signals to use the credit card illegally. Therefore, social and economical disorders are the biggest problems that today society faces.
Psychologists of Oxford University study social disabilities to which modern communicational technology may lead. They have observed the treatments of 50 kids who have touched all kinds of cyber facilities and modern technologies during their growth. After 20 years of living and communicating in virtual world, these teenagers lack the capability of doing team works, and staying in touch with other people, because they have never sensed the joy real world relationship. These psychologists survey that those people who involves in computer generated communication more than usual will decidedly forget the real life communication, and cannot take after their family and themselves adequately. Therefore, this kind of virtual relationships people make not only causes many psychological disorders, but also make doing social behavior for human difficult.
To summarize this essay, it should be noted that although technology makes living easy, and has many economical, communicational, environmental benefits, it knows as the root of many social and psychological problems. Therefore, it is the main duty of governments to establish a trade of between real and virtual relationships so as to make society a better place for living.