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SaiAnui   
Dec 1, 2008
Undergraduate / "Without opponents, I might fall asleep" - ut essay TOPIC A [5]

Sometimes it's disappointing whenever I see that people's dreams and passions have been snuffed out by haters.

Wow. Awesome essay. It really shows how much your aunt allowed you to change yourself for the better. :)
SaiAnui   
Nov 30, 2008
Undergraduate / Sociology - uc prompt ; never came to my mind when I was juggling through majors [4]

I first stumbled upon the subject when I started taking general education classes at a junior level college. My interest in it grew when I took my first Sociology class. I remember having the preconceived notion that it was going to be a waste of time. When I first saw my teacher, I immediately assumed that the class would contain nothing but boring lectures and essays to write. However, my opinion immediately changed as soon as he opened his mouth. He made me think about how each and every act that we do is a stepping-stone for someone else in the future.

"We were making the future and hardly any of us troubled to think what future we were making. And here it is! If we don't end war, war will end us." This quote from the sociologist H.G. Wells inspired me the most. Even though it might seem a bit cliché, at the time I read it, its message just came jumping out at me. From that point on, my life at school changed completely.

I had been a part of student body now for about a year and obtained a lot from the experience. A lot of it had to do with Care Bank--one of the committees I was representing. We would give out free bus passes and gift cards to grocery stores for use by underprivileged students. I would conduct interviews with the students and was able to see a lot of different cases. One student in particular caught my eye. He was a minority and was born into drug and money laundering--but he decided to change his life for the better by educating himself. This made me think about how our society works as a whole and if we keep on making the same mistakes in life we don't hold anything in our future. If I can help a kid like this succeed in school, then sociology is my path. I knew that I could do what Care Bank does but on a much larger scale. H.G. Wells' quote kept floating through my mind when I was interviewing the kid. If this kid could keep himself from harming others, then the world would have a lot less suffering.

So then, I thought of something I could do to help students in his situation: Along with my pre-requisites studies for pharmacy school, I would also like to do some research on underprivileged children. The saying "the children are our future" best fits my goal in my educational career. My family background comes from a country with a lot of uneducated people who make very little money due to the lack of education in their society. Helping spread education(?) on a more global level would be my goal in my research.

After making that decision, it was a struggle for me to explain it to my family. All throughout my life, my family and I had the dream of me wearing the white lab coat and helping a person with my cold stethoscope. At first, it seemed like a big jump from planning to major in chemistry for pharmaceutical school to majoring in sociology. However, when my parents saw how much I was enjoying my new major, they knew that it was the best decision for me and gave me their full support. Having my family back me up on this decision made it a whole lot easier to motivate myself to work even harder.

I don't think that I would be in this situation if I hadn't done student body and taken my inspirational sociology class.

(These last two lines seem a bit unnecessary...)
Having three older brothers also helped steering me in the right direction. Being able to learn from their mistakes has helped a lot in making my lifelong decisions.

(Ah...well, I edited out some parts I thought didn't fit--hope it helps!)
SaiAnui   
Nov 30, 2008
Undergraduate / My brother had his own life to deal with; UT : Person's impact on life [3]

Write an essay in which you tell us about someone who has made a impact on your life and explain how and why this person is important to you.

Kids, when they grow to a certain age, usually tend to rail on their parents for not 'understanding' them, and I wasn't any different. With troubles at school and clashes with my parents, life was tough with no one to talk to. My brother had his own life to deal with, and couldn't be bothered with any of my problemsïnor did I want to burden him with them. Thankfully, however, I wasn't left to brood away on my own. My stepbrother, Peter, was always a phone call away and ready to listen and help me get through any hurdles I might come across. A good 13 years separated us, placing him at an age where he wasn't too rash or old-fashioned. He was a child of the 80s who had to fend for himself when both his parents decided to get jobs to support the family. Thus, he became independent early on and tried his hand at various activities in order to find a path he could walk on. He had an intricate group of friends for company and support during those younger years, though he tended to keep his own company at times. His holidays were usually strict and formal affairs, devoid of 'fun' since my father believed in pressuring a child into growing up rather than letting them enjoy being a kid. After my father divorced his mom, he fell into a period of depression, but in the end, he pulled through and decided he'd go to college after graduating from high school. There was no point in ruining the rest of his life over one incident after all.

When I was born, Peter was already a part of our household. Though he might've held some ill will against my brother and I for taking his father away, the man fondly took care of us like an older brother. He made sure we stayed out of trouble and was a constant mediator of peace when Sam and I had our petty arguments. I enjoyed his company over Sam's because, unlike my older brother of two years, he actually paid attention and knew things about the world that I did not. It was fascinating to see how differently he thought from his fatherïthey often bashed heads when it came to certain issues. More than anything I can remember, though...he taught me how to enjoy life. Instead of allowing me to hole myself up in my room each day to read like my parents had, he took me for walks and showed me the world.

To this day, I admire him for his perseverance and set path in life. Though he only obtained an associate's degree, he still managed to find jobs with a steady income. An undying optimist, he lived his life the way he wanted to, and managed to find and hone his own talents. He was, and still is, a comforting presence in my life. Unlike my parents, he wanted to hear my opinions and let me enjoy life as a child for as long as I could. He rescued me from a going through the narrow alleyway of 'pure education'ïshut off from social contact and the outside world. My parents just wanted me to be a top student no matter what the cost, and pressured me into staying inside most of the time to study. His intervention gave me some of my favorite childhood memories...

(Is it too...talkative? Ah, and does 'the prevention of cancer' count as an 'issue of importance'?)

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