Book Reports / Book review on THE LORD OF THE FLIES ('allegory of humanity and its evil nature') [4]

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"The Lord of the Flies" is an allegory of humanity and its evil nature, written shortly after the end of World War II by William Golding in 1945. The main theme of this book is civilization vs. savagery, which represents the conflict between the human's inherent tendency towards savagery and the customs of civilization that restrains it.

During the cold war, a plane full of young British school boys is shot down and crashes onto a deserted tropical island. At first, boys are spread apart and clueless about what to do without any adults. As the boys unite on one spot by following the sound of a conch blown by a boy called piggy, two influential leaders emerge from the group: Ralph and Jack. Despite Jack being the leader of his choir group, later known as "The Hunters", Ralph is elected to become the master leader of the boys. Ralph tries to set order and rules among the boys yet, his attempts become futile as they fail to complete their duties and fear of an unknown beast in the forest take over their gullible minds. Conflicts and tensions arise between Ralph and Jack as they try to settle down the problems. Finally, Jack's group of hunters leave the beach to form their own society with different goals and succeed in luring most of the people in joining them by offering meat. Most of the time, they try to fill their uncontrollable desire for entertainment by hunting. Consequently, the most boys in the island pursue the life of hysterical savagery. At one point, they kill a pig and hang its blood-dripping head on a stick in the forest, known as the "Lord of the Flies", which symbolizes the complete destruction of innocence and civilization. As time progresses, this violent chaos spread as Jack irrationally leads the boys.

Overall, I believe this book contained an intriguing storyline with suspense throughout each chapter. I was drawn in to the story because I became curious about what was going to happen next as the situation on the island became more unpredictable chapter by chapter. The variety of personalities and roles of boys were also few of many factors that made the storyline so interesting. Kids' reckless actions and arguments made me think about what I would do if I was in their position. (<--POSSIBLY BEtter wording for that sentence?) Although the story was clearly told without any distraction, I felt that it became a bit repetitive during the middle, mainly because of the occurrence of the same conflict throughout the book. The setting did not change at all and nor did the conflicts. On the other hand, William Golding's message that maintaining the civilization should be the top priority was well expressed through the constant symbolisms in the story. I agree with the message because during the ancient times, weren't savagery and cruelty so prominent among the human race? It wasn't until the recent eras where civilization greatly reduced those aspects of humans. Also this book was written at the end of World War II, which is probably what inspired William Golding to write this book. I realized the importance of civilization and how it would be if it didn't exist and savagery took over.

This book was a story of reckless boys trying to survive on an island, forming a society of their own when no one had taught them anything. This shows the humans' savagery that lies deep within us and its clashing with rules of civilization. I would suggest this book to people who like survival and adventure stories that reflects on humans and their nature.

THANKS im in gr 9 btw