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Mar 13, 2012
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Mar 11, 2012
Writing Feedback / 'People first' - a society cannot put its own overall success [3]
PEOPLE FIRST
Although the overall success of a society is necessary, however, the enjoyable life of its people is more important. Thanks to the efforts which are put on the work work of the individuals from their self and the stable environment of the society, which gradually influence the development of the society.
The well-being of an individual could lead to them putting more effort in their work. Working with a high spirit and great interest surely makes the process of working more efficiently. A father can be totally absorbed in his work without worrying about his car or insurance whereas a mother can also do her work without caring about her children's education or her parents' health problem if they live under a good circumstance of welfare. Therefore, the efficiency of work is increasing, and then the economic development of the society will accelerate, too. People are the basement and owner of a society and their happiness should be put over the success of a society.
In addition, a society can be more stable and attribute to the expectations of the citizens and satisfy them. The fact that many countries are in wars is a persuasive example of this point. Many governments said that they would improve their lifestyle as they wish, but they did not do so. When people begin to protect their interests and benefits, governments and their people will be in conflict. In result of this, the countries declare wars. How can a country without a stable environment develop its economy? Overall, the stability of a society owes to the well-being of its people.
In conclusion, a society cannot put its own overall success over the well-being of its individual citizens.
PEOPLE FIRST
Although the overall success of a society is necessary, however, the enjoyable life of its people is more important. Thanks to the efforts which are put on the work work of the individuals from their self and the stable environment of the society, which gradually influence the development of the society.
The well-being of an individual could lead to them putting more effort in their work. Working with a high spirit and great interest surely makes the process of working more efficiently. A father can be totally absorbed in his work without worrying about his car or insurance whereas a mother can also do her work without caring about her children's education or her parents' health problem if they live under a good circumstance of welfare. Therefore, the efficiency of work is increasing, and then the economic development of the society will accelerate, too. People are the basement and owner of a society and their happiness should be put over the success of a society.
In addition, a society can be more stable and attribute to the expectations of the citizens and satisfy them. The fact that many countries are in wars is a persuasive example of this point. Many governments said that they would improve their lifestyle as they wish, but they did not do so. When people begin to protect their interests and benefits, governments and their people will be in conflict. In result of this, the countries declare wars. How can a country without a stable environment develop its economy? Overall, the stability of a society owes to the well-being of its people.
In conclusion, a society cannot put its own overall success over the well-being of its individual citizens.
CLT
Mar 11, 2012
Writing Feedback / The Advantages Of Being A Good Speaker [5]
I would like to wish everyone a very good afternoon. Today, I will be talking about the advantages of being a good public speaker. Being a good public speaker means having the ability to stand in front of an audience and convey messages by speaking marvelously. If one could achieve that, he/she will benefit a lot more than others.
Ways to make people know you. You can either spend money to print name cards, advertisements, flyers or brochures to give as many people as possible, or you can start opening your mouth and make people remember you. A good public speaker enhances a social life and the ability to negotiate with other people. Being good at you feet, speaking diligently in front of others is one of the easiest ways to increase your group of friends, acquaintances and general influence. A good public speaker always find themselves called upon to speak or have a chat.
Public speaking enhances the ability to fulfill your organizational or business needs. Your colleagues may be technically or practically brilliant. They may have great and strong ideas in mind. Yet, it is a good public speaker who can speak well in front of a group, putting over their point of view powerfully and persuasively, will outstrip others everytime. EVERYTIME!
Being a good speaker, you enhance the ability to motivate others and change their lives for a better. As we all know that words can hurt, but it can also heal, create, build and transform. For example, Martin Luther King, the leader of the Civil Rights Movement, is the best speaker of all times. Just by one speech, "I Have A Dream", he was able to motivate all the black nations in America, change their minds, gave them hope and faith, lifted up their spirits, shake the world, convince the whites and imply a great impact on his audience. Your words are your seeds and your audience's hearts are the ground your seed is planted. Being a good speaker, you might find yourself changing someone's life, saving them from jumping off the cliff of their miseries.
Last but not the least, being a good public speaker improves your self esteem. It also creates an aura of self confidence and self image improvement. Confidence and self esteem come from being successful and being successful comes from being a linguistic public speaker.
As my conclusion, being a good speaker certainly has lots of advantages. They improve ourselves and our lives. You don't know, one day, you might become somebody's someone or a person as great as Martin Luther King. So start opening your mouth and speak confidently. Thank you for sparing me your precious time.
I would like to wish everyone a very good afternoon. Today, I will be talking about the advantages of being a good public speaker. Being a good public speaker means having the ability to stand in front of an audience and convey messages by speaking marvelously. If one could achieve that, he/she will benefit a lot more than others.
Ways to make people know you. You can either spend money to print name cards, advertisements, flyers or brochures to give as many people as possible, or you can start opening your mouth and make people remember you. A good public speaker enhances a social life and the ability to negotiate with other people. Being good at you feet, speaking diligently in front of others is one of the easiest ways to increase your group of friends, acquaintances and general influence. A good public speaker always find themselves called upon to speak or have a chat.
Public speaking enhances the ability to fulfill your organizational or business needs. Your colleagues may be technically or practically brilliant. They may have great and strong ideas in mind. Yet, it is a good public speaker who can speak well in front of a group, putting over their point of view powerfully and persuasively, will outstrip others everytime. EVERYTIME!
Being a good speaker, you enhance the ability to motivate others and change their lives for a better. As we all know that words can hurt, but it can also heal, create, build and transform. For example, Martin Luther King, the leader of the Civil Rights Movement, is the best speaker of all times. Just by one speech, "I Have A Dream", he was able to motivate all the black nations in America, change their minds, gave them hope and faith, lifted up their spirits, shake the world, convince the whites and imply a great impact on his audience. Your words are your seeds and your audience's hearts are the ground your seed is planted. Being a good speaker, you might find yourself changing someone's life, saving them from jumping off the cliff of their miseries.
Last but not the least, being a good public speaker improves your self esteem. It also creates an aura of self confidence and self image improvement. Confidence and self esteem come from being successful and being successful comes from being a linguistic public speaker.
As my conclusion, being a good speaker certainly has lots of advantages. They improve ourselves and our lives. You don't know, one day, you might become somebody's someone or a person as great as Martin Luther King. So start opening your mouth and speak confidently. Thank you for sparing me your precious time.
