Writing Feedback / ESSAY FOR CLASSIFICATION - Curriculums designed for elementary school students [4]

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To start with,its obvious that student love takes some advantages.Most students now go to study far from their home and have an independent life.Thus,if a student gets a bf or gf,he/she can share nd empathize emotional feelings,joys nd sorrows,difficulties in life with his/her lover.U will always feel happy nd fun when u always have a feeling of being under ur lover's care nd love.Besides,u can help each other a lot in life nd study.To illustrate,if ur bf is an excellent student,he'll become ur movitation or inspiration to study harder nd harder.