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Apr 19, 2012
Writing Feedback / 'exposed to the ever-accelerated technology' - ielts : an essay written by myself [10]

today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real need of the society in which they are sold.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Basking in the glory of unprecedented technology progress, advertising enjoys diversified ways to every family. In the wake of advertising flourish, there is a matter of much contention about its influence on consumption compared to the real need. Some people just point out that publicity instead of demand is the driving force which boosts goods consuming. I can not completely see with this extreme view.

There is no denying that advertisements exert a profound influence on the sales of popular consumer goods. However, this effect which I prefer to be convinced of only increase a great deal of dissatisfied consuming rather than high level of sales.

Therefore, I suppose it is still consumers' needs stimulate consumption.
It seems that goods propagandizing with commercial methods appear more alluring to the public, especially they are endorsing by celebrities. It sounds like reasonable that driving by blind worship of idols as well as exaggerated description of advertisements people make consuming with impulsivity. Nonetheless, given the fact of limitation in finance, what all these factors mentioned above actually do not make a large share in consumer market. Put the situation into extreme, a person, starving to death, once is given a little money which is only enough for bread or a small toy advertised on TV, what will this person choose? The apparently result is sound evident of importance of the real need in the society.

In conclusion, the determinant boosting sales is still social need, and advertising dose make some contribution to the growth. Joint power from both keeps escalating trend of consumption.
zhangxiangwei   
Apr 15, 2012
Writing Feedback / 'exposed to the ever-accelerated technology' - ielts : an essay written by myself [10]

Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.
In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make?
Has this become a positive or negative development?
Have been exposed to the ever-accelerated technology, people have the voice about whether the influence on methods of interaction made by modern technology is a blessing or a curse. Aiming to this disputed issue, though the opinions vary from person to person, I would like to go along with the view that high tech plays a positive role in the changes of communication.

It is widely acknowledged that technical innovations have made earth-shaking conversions in the ways used by people to interact with others. For businesses, widespread use of teleconference makes it possible for enterprises strengthening their relationships with each other and cutting down their cost which used to be spent on business trips. Then in daily life, instead of writing letters and make phone calls, having talks with "face-time", chatting on QQ and mini-blog become the most people's choices. Thanks to all the straightforward brought by technology, far-off man can lighten their home-sick, couples tighten their love even they are departed geographically; strangers get more accesses to make friends worldwide.

However, in the sharp contras, the opponents insist on that technology poses a great deal of inevitable problems. The vivid communicating means make people prefer to interact just in virtual world rather than to have gatherings in real life, which actually weaken the sincerity among friends. But if there were no such a development, could it be sure that the words from speakers are faithful?

In conclusion, technology progress not only provides people with closer link but also present a larger communication arena.
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