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faithcarson   
Apr 28, 2012
Book Reports / Essay on bird symbolism in Kate Chopin's, The Awakening <3 [2]

"Men have hitherto treated women like birds which have strayed down to them from the heights; as something more delicate, more fragile, more savage, stranger, sweeter, soulful - but as something which has to be caged up so that it shall not fly away." In the novella, The Awakening, Kate Chopin explores how man, as well as the society of the 1800's "caged" its women. By symbolizing women as birds, Chopin adds wonderment to her work and simultaneously encourages the reader to understand it at a deeper level.

When the reader is introduced into the life of the main character; Edna Pontellier has not yet been "awakened." She is, at this point in her life, symbolized by the "green and yellow parrot, which hung in a cage outside." Edna cannot fly away to freedom due equally to both the social constraints she is bound by, as well as the family she is expected to tend to and raise. As Edna begins to experience things that lead her to her awakening, she realizes the bars she is trapped behind and becomes restless. The caged parrot, introduced in the beginning of Chopin's story speaks "a language which nobody understood, unless it was the mocking-bird that hung on the other side of the door, whistling his fluty notes out upon the breeze with maddening persistence." The idea that the parrot is misunderstood is a representation of Edna and her inability to relate to the society she is tied to. The only person who understands her is Mademoiselle Reisz, who is symbolized by the mockingbird that flits outside the window.

The other women in the novel are depicted as birds as well. These women are a perfect depiction of what Edna should be according to society. Chopin, however, makes it clear to the reader, that while these women may be ignorantly content with the lives they lead, and the role they play, they too are caged. The women of Grand Isle "flutter about with extended, protecting wings when any harm, real or imaginary, threatened their precious brood." These "winged" mothers are only ever able to use their wings to shelter and protect, never to fly. They too, are unknowingly trapped by society and familial responsibilities.

As Edna pushes deeper through the process of her awakening, she becomes increasingly dissatisfied with the life she leads. In an attempt to escape, Miss Pontellier leaves her family and moves to the "pigeon house." The independence that Edna feels as a result of the move is fleeting, as she soon realizes that her new life is another cage, just "two steps away" from where she was before. The Mademoiselle realizes Edna's struggle because she too had undergone the struggle of breaking out of society's constraints, and although she has gained her freedom, she must fly alone and misunderstood. Through her own experience, she has learned that "the bird that would soar above the level plain of tradition and prejudice must have strong wings," As Mademoiselle Reisz feels Edna's "shoulder blades to see if [her] wings are strong," she the shares knowledge and wisdom she has earned over time. Edna is warned that to gain her freedom is a difficult battle. The mademoiselle tells her, "It is a sad spectacle to see the weaklings bruised, exhausted, fluttering back to earth."

Sadly, as Edna becomes fully awakened and aware of the life she lives, she begins to feel hopeless, as she understands that there is no escape. As Edna goes back to the beach where her journey of awakening began, she sees an injured bird "with a broken wing, beating the air above, reeling, fluttering, circling disables down, down to the water." The bird represents Edna and the desolation that has disabled her. She realizes that she will never be able to live her life the way she wants to. She sees death as her only escape to freedom. Her death is her final awakening. As Kate Chopin writes, "Perhaps it is better to wake up after all, even to suffer, rather than to remain a dupe to illusions all one's life."
faithcarson   
Apr 26, 2012
Writing Feedback / Humanities summarizing paper [4]

I would love to help you because this sounds like an interesting essay topic, however I am unclear as to what you mean. Please expand a bit more and I will be glad to help.
faithcarson   
Apr 25, 2012
Writing Feedback / My opnion is that smoking should be banned in public places [3]

I agree with Susan, it all looks great, just be sure you are persuading the reader one way or another. The point of bringing up an opposing opinion in your essay is so that you can refute it. Make sure that when you are giving reasons as to why smoking should be allowed, you are rebutting it, in order to drive your point home with the reader. Best of luck to you! :)

Be sure to check out my thread if you can. I need as much help as possible! :)
faithcarson   
Apr 25, 2012
Scholarship / 'Dental hygiene is the ideal career for me' - my goals [3]

Awesome job! The only thing I'd say is there is a bit of interruption in your word flow when you say: "Good qualities for a dental hygienist are compassion and enjoying talking to people..." In order to make this sentence easier to read I suggest changing the structure so that your sentence is parallel. For example, "Qualities necessary for a good dental hygienist include compassion and the ability to comunicate well with others..." specifically, the word enjoying disrupts the flow of your sentence there, but other than that, excellent peice of work. :)

if you have the time, please check out my thread. I need as much insight as possible! Thank you!
faithcarson   
Apr 23, 2012
Scholarship / 'a well-educated person can survive' - Scholarship Essay-Transfer Plans [3]

I would take out "of all" from "first and foremost of all." it sounds awkward.

maybe instead if saying "i know this will be a lot of hard work," replace "i know" with "I recognize" and avoid using the word "this" as it is vague. define what will be hard work. For example, "I recognize that my career path requires a great amount of hard work and dedication, but I am determined to reach my goal. << take out "of becoming a ental hygenist." you already stated your goal previously and restating it sounds redundant.

take the word "up" out of "I will certainly use up the opportunity to the maximum." and maybe replace "to the maximum" with something more like "I will certainly use the opportunity to its full potential.

it might be a good idea to expand on how Montgomery College is a good fit for your family life. As you read your essay ask yourself, How? and write it.

I hope I helped. Best of luck to you! :)
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