cooper92i
Mar 21, 2007
Undergraduate / Descriptive essay on my backyard [6]
I'm in 9th grade and i am writing a descriptive essay on my backyard, but i need to make it longer can anyoe help me?
My backyard is very significant to making my house a fun and relaxing place to live. The backyard is not any ordinary backyard, it's a place to take it easy by the pool, have barbeques and to host family gatherings.
The finest thing about my backyard is my swimming pool. On warm summer days, hopping into my pool is like sitting down in your big cozy chair after a long exhausting hike. On these hot summer days, it is also convenient to call some friends to come over and swim. Our pool has a stunning view, under the baking hot sun twinkles akin to a crystal.
The barbeque is also very significant to making my backyard complete. It's superb to settle down for the evening with some hot dogs and hamburgers.
Every time for a family gathering, everyone wants to have it in our backyard. We have an adequate amount of room to fit everyone in. Outside everyone can socialize abd munch on the barbequed food. You can smell the barbeques smoke drifting in the evening sky.
My backyard really is an important part of our home because without the twinkling water in the pool, the smoke scent from the barbeque, and my great-uncle and my aunt arguing over who gets the last piece of steak, our house is far from pleasant.
I'm in 9th grade and i am writing a descriptive essay on my backyard, but i need to make it longer can anyoe help me?
My backyard is very significant to making my house a fun and relaxing place to live. The backyard is not any ordinary backyard, it's a place to take it easy by the pool, have barbeques and to host family gatherings.
The finest thing about my backyard is my swimming pool. On warm summer days, hopping into my pool is like sitting down in your big cozy chair after a long exhausting hike. On these hot summer days, it is also convenient to call some friends to come over and swim. Our pool has a stunning view, under the baking hot sun twinkles akin to a crystal.
The barbeque is also very significant to making my backyard complete. It's superb to settle down for the evening with some hot dogs and hamburgers.
Every time for a family gathering, everyone wants to have it in our backyard. We have an adequate amount of room to fit everyone in. Outside everyone can socialize abd munch on the barbequed food. You can smell the barbeques smoke drifting in the evening sky.
My backyard really is an important part of our home because without the twinkling water in the pool, the smoke scent from the barbeque, and my great-uncle and my aunt arguing over who gets the last piece of steak, our house is far from pleasant.
