Scholarship / 'Manager Site Merchandiser' Scholarships for working parents, long-term career goal? [3]

Please help me with any ideas. I have to write an essay about my long-term career goals and I need some help to get started. Here is what I got started thus for...

Since my senior year in high school I have been working for a great company. I have achieved many job opportunites inside the company thus far; but my goal job would be to become one of the Senior Manager Site Merchandiser. In order to accomplish my goal at the company I would need to attain a business management degree. Virginia College would be the right college to acquire my goal because they would help me strive to become successful in my future. While in college if I study hard and work even harder I will achieve anything I set my mind to because I would have the proper guidance and various skills when I graduate. I then could pay it forward to my community and my job in which helped me get to the place I am today.