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Dec 23, 2008
Undergraduate / The world is currently in a major crisis. Common App - Issue of Concern [9]
Merged:The world is currently in a major crisis. Common App Issue of Concern
I am exhausted. Three SATs and a few applications accompanied by an onslaught of essays have worn me out. I keep trying to believe that I can make the deadlines, but that alone absorbs all of my energy and leaves none for the processes themselves. Distractions seem more and more amusing, but a top quality education stimulates me more than ephemeral pleasures. Time soars at unstoppable speeds, and I feel as if I will reach my end before the deadline. The internal conflict of hopelessness in these kinds of seemingly impossible situations leads many to failure.
The world is currently in a major crisis. Although many might automatically think of the economy, I feel that the true crisis at hand is a loss of hope. Because of our hopelessness, we continually fall towards failure. Global warming is also another crisis that brings doom to mind; however, it is due to a feeling of hopelessness among people that nothing absolute is done towards a greener world. We must subdue this feeling and try hard to work toward our goals.
As I started my senior year in high school, I felt no pressure and was carefree. I knew an impending SAT was coming up, but I did not stress about it. I was also hopeful and felt I would do very well on it. My hope of a good result earned me a 220 point stride from my previous score; although, I had no idea of the impending challenges that were ahead.
When it came time to study for what I thought was my last SAT, maintaining a solid GPA of a 4.0 became harder and harder especially with two AP courses racing on. I started to feel the pressure. This was not the end; it became much more elaborate. I found out that I had to write a slew of essays for the colleges that I was applying to, not to mention the endless and confusing applications.
The Common Application was an invaluable reference until I got to the supplements. I felt that if a college needed to ask these questions, why not just do an interview? This ludicrous method of acceptance made me not want any part of it; after all, it seemed impossible. I had started to lose hope.
Just as I had started to lose hope, my passionate desire to go to a top quality university motivated me to strive to complete the process. Just then, I realized a major concern that we are facing and how we can fix it. It may seem obvious that through motivation we can achieve our ambitions. On the other hand, it is not as plain for everyone to see. Until we open our eyes and picture ourselves where we want to be, we can not get there.
Ultimately, I feel that the lack of hope is a serious problem that the whole world faces. If I had not comprehended this philosophy, I could have not formulated this essay nor been able to accomplish any of my goals. Hope is what keeps us going and that alone is what I treasure the most.
This is my final copy of the common essay. If there are any mistakes, please do not hold back any comments or suggestions.
Thanks in advance!
Merged:The world is currently in a major crisis. Common App Issue of Concern
I am exhausted. Three SATs and a few applications accompanied by an onslaught of essays have worn me out. I keep trying to believe that I can make the deadlines, but that alone absorbs all of my energy and leaves none for the processes themselves. Distractions seem more and more amusing, but a top quality education stimulates me more than ephemeral pleasures. Time soars at unstoppable speeds, and I feel as if I will reach my end before the deadline. The internal conflict of hopelessness in these kinds of seemingly impossible situations leads many to failure.
The world is currently in a major crisis. Although many might automatically think of the economy, I feel that the true crisis at hand is a loss of hope. Because of our hopelessness, we continually fall towards failure. Global warming is also another crisis that brings doom to mind; however, it is due to a feeling of hopelessness among people that nothing absolute is done towards a greener world. We must subdue this feeling and try hard to work toward our goals.
As I started my senior year in high school, I felt no pressure and was carefree. I knew an impending SAT was coming up, but I did not stress about it. I was also hopeful and felt I would do very well on it. My hope of a good result earned me a 220 point stride from my previous score; although, I had no idea of the impending challenges that were ahead.
When it came time to study for what I thought was my last SAT, maintaining a solid GPA of a 4.0 became harder and harder especially with two AP courses racing on. I started to feel the pressure. This was not the end; it became much more elaborate. I found out that I had to write a slew of essays for the colleges that I was applying to, not to mention the endless and confusing applications.
The Common Application was an invaluable reference until I got to the supplements. I felt that if a college needed to ask these questions, why not just do an interview? This ludicrous method of acceptance made me not want any part of it; after all, it seemed impossible. I had started to lose hope.
Just as I had started to lose hope, my passionate desire to go to a top quality university motivated me to strive to complete the process. Just then, I realized a major concern that we are facing and how we can fix it. It may seem obvious that through motivation we can achieve our ambitions. On the other hand, it is not as plain for everyone to see. Until we open our eyes and picture ourselves where we want to be, we can not get there.
Ultimately, I feel that the lack of hope is a serious problem that the whole world faces. If I had not comprehended this philosophy, I could have not formulated this essay nor been able to accomplish any of my goals. Hope is what keeps us going and that alone is what I treasure the most.
This is my final copy of the common essay. If there are any mistakes, please do not hold back any comments or suggestions.
Thanks in advance!