halinh123
May 19, 2012
Writing Feedback / Task 1 IELTS - Letter about defective kitchen product [4]
PBeltrao
Well, i think that your writting is realy good. However, in my opinion, you should focus more on tense. For example, if you tell about a story, you should use past tense rather than present simple tense.
+ When I turned on the machine, it emited a really strange sound, like a Formula One car passing by at 200 mph. After being washed, my dished looked dirtier than before and my silverware looked like it's made of brass instead of silver.
PBeltrao
Well, i think that your writting is realy good. However, in my opinion, you should focus more on tense. For example, if you tell about a story, you should use past tense rather than present simple tense.
+ When I turned on the machine, it emited a really strange sound, like a Formula One car passing by at 200 mph. After being washed, my dished looked dirtier than before and my silverware looked like it's made of brass instead of silver.