RyaneBin
Jun 6, 2012
Research Papers / Research about some of the main health problems in America [5]
Hey again Elena,
I took away "The factors contributing to heart diseases include poor diet, lack of exercise leading to fat buildups and a weak heart, stress and smoking." and added it to the last paragraph.
What do you think of this ending?
Avoiding both the diseases mentioned above is fairly simple and similar, but hard to maintain for most people. Maintaining a healthy diet is an important factor to follow, that could help you avoid a lot of diseases. Build a good exercise habit because lack of exercise leads to fat buildups and a weak heart, thats especially not good if you want to avoid any type of heart disease. Stay out of stressful situations and learn to manage them with ease. Last but not least, "Smoking Kills". Stay away from any tobacco product and avoid secondhand smoke. Secondhand is just as harmful! Its not hard knowing how to stay healthy, its common sense really. Stay healthy and avoid unhealthy meals and snacks.
Hey again Elena,
I took away "The factors contributing to heart diseases include poor diet, lack of exercise leading to fat buildups and a weak heart, stress and smoking." and added it to the last paragraph.
What do you think of this ending?
Avoiding both the diseases mentioned above is fairly simple and similar, but hard to maintain for most people. Maintaining a healthy diet is an important factor to follow, that could help you avoid a lot of diseases. Build a good exercise habit because lack of exercise leads to fat buildups and a weak heart, thats especially not good if you want to avoid any type of heart disease. Stay out of stressful situations and learn to manage them with ease. Last but not least, "Smoking Kills". Stay away from any tobacco product and avoid secondhand smoke. Secondhand is just as harmful! Its not hard knowing how to stay healthy, its common sense really. Stay healthy and avoid unhealthy meals and snacks.