Writing Feedback / IELTS:Some people like to travel with companion other people prefer to travel alone [3]

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IELTS Topic:Some people like to travel with companion other people prefer to travel alone.Which do you prefer?

The travel is talked of the town,If we have closely a long holiday and mostly we will have a question about that such as "Where do you travel this long holidays ? or Who enjoy with you travel?"

but some times we should be travel with your friends or travel alone.This essay will be briefly discribe about the travel between companion or alone.

First off all,the people like to travel with companion is look like a tourist group.Commonly, this travel has many activities such as the night party, sing a song, recreation or roam sbout the forest.

Then,I thoroughly enjoyed the delicious that activities.In addition,we give precedence sucurity for the traveling.Sometimes we have found an emergency during a travel,If we have my friends that is easiler to handle and take us too.By the way, the cost that is must have to make decision to travel with your companion or alone.If we enjoyed having with my companion it can saving the travel expenses.

Secondly,the people like to travel alone is asocial person or he has alonely feeling.Then,it is influance to your decision to choose the travel.This travel is easiler to get the tourism location for you travel.For the security,the traveller should have prepared the baggage and necessities to travel.That is protectted an emergency.

In conclusion, Every body knows that the travels are hope your life relaxedly and make liveliness.In my openion I refer travel with companion because it can make the association in my organization.

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Writing Feedback / Effect of the invention to auto car on the living of people in your contry. [3]

It is wildly belived that technology has changed every times .Before many years ago,there was a difficulty in communicating between each other,travel was difficult,because there no a cars and a trains.So evereyone who needed to go to another place would take along time before he arrived there.But now the new invention of technology it is made the communication between people more easier in several ways.This essay will briefly describe the effect of the invention to auto mobile on the living of people.

The transprtation,before there were using an old methods like camels,donkey and horses for traveling and carring from their town to another town but it took along

time and a lot of dangerously danger from walking for days at the desert because there is a lot of willd animals.So right now we have invented the new vehicles

such as the car ,boat ,trains and airplans.That is help us to go to anywhere in a few hours without feeling of tried.For example ,if someone living in Bangkok and

he wants to visit his family in Saraburi provide he cannnot come by his foot.So these inventions let our lives more easier than before.

In conclusion , every new invention made our lives easier comfortable and give us more benifits in our daily lives.

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