Writing Feedback / [IELTS] Teenagers with unpaid work is justifiable! [2]

Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. They believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole.

Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, society has to face with many issues and need supports very much. Some people say that local community can be received helps from teenagers through unpaid work. I do agree with the this idea. It has many advantages not only for each individual teenager but also for society.

Teenagers are more and more active now, they are not only good at study but also good at social work. Voluntary activities help them develop in positive way. There are several explanations for my belief. Firstly, teenagers can develop many skills thanks to unpaid work, for instance: communication skill, living skill, team-work skill. Secondly, they get the chances to make new friends and extend relation. In addition, voluntary work gives make their biography more beautiful, it is very useful for their future both studying abroad and applying for jobs. Thus, unpaid work help teenagers live positively.

Besides, teenagers who take part in voluntary activities contribute benefits for community. Society is decreased social burden such as porvety or environmental pollution. Furthermore, unpaid work creates the confidence and the hope for unlucky people then they can pass over their misfortunes. Since, society will develop unshakably.

As can clearly seen from above evidences, voluntary activities are useful for teenagers to help themselves and community. Consequently, they should do unpaid work as much as possible.

Writing Feedback / 'science books and skill books' - What kinds of books should we read? [2]

Topic: Today, there are many books to read. In your opinion, what kinds of books should we read?

Books are one of the best tools to help people approach the world. Nowadays, many books are established, it leads to difficult for readers to choose. The issue of whether choosing books has been debated widely. Personally, I think there are two kinds of books we should read: Science books and Skill books.

There are positive reasons for reading science books and skill books. First of all, science books provide us general knowledge about not only natural but also artificial phenomenons on the World. For instance, science books can help mankind understand water cycle, the essence of disasters such as vocalno, storm and so forth or it gives us the information about how to make clay, vihicles. Therefore, human being can understand clearly essence of each appearance which very helpful for them to avoid bad things or develop their life.

The second kind of book we should read is skill books. Skill books have many types such as: living skills, business skills etc. All of them are likely alternative programs for people who don't have enough time to take part in skill courses. Thanks for skill books, people know how to live, communicate and deal with problems more. Take for example, the book "How to win friends and influence people" help readers to perfect themselves and get more love and respect from the others. One more example is the book "Diffentiate or Die" which decribes many strategy to get success in business. As can be seen clearly from those examples, skill books help people live effectively.

In conclusion, there are many advantages that science books and skill books bring to us. Let's read them in negative way to improve and perfect ourselves.