garyit
Dec 14, 2013
Writing Feedback / IELTS- Workers in traditional industry (doctors, nursing and teachers) [7]
The issue of whether theindustry such doctors, nursing and teaching should received
The topic is about job, not industry. Doctor is a job, but nursing and teaching are activities. When you say doctor, nursing and teaching, it is very strange.
The issue of whether the
The topic is about job, not industry. Doctor is a job, but nursing and teaching are activities. When you say doctor, nursing and teaching, it is very strange.
