Writing Feedback / IELTS!! To obey rules or to have less rules? How to grow up? [4]

topic: Some people think children should obey the rules their parents and teachers set and listen to them, but others think less control will help children to deal with their future adult life. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The relative importance of obeying parents' rules and getting less control from them is a frequent topic of discussion when people have an educational problem how to treat with our children better.

Apparently, the traditional way of educating children is to make them listen to the senior generation's order and follow the rules. The young generation may be naughty and unruly, or even be tempted to a criminal road, without the necessary and essential rules and guidance from their parents and teachers.

While, less order from the exterior may let children cultivate their own sense of self-control and self-management, which can straightly affect their adult life. The self-control helps children to have less drive to eat the whole bag of chips, and when they grow these children may have less possibilities to run off the credit cards.

In conclusion, it is impossible to view a kid as an adult at a young age, thus obeying the basic and necessary rules from the parents and teachers is beneficial to the young children in order to lead them to a right way to grow up. However, cultivating a sense of self-control and self-management is also a part of the process of being mature and growing up. The environment of less exterior order but more self-control may assist children to manage their future life.