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Jul 31, 2012
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Jul 28, 2012
Writing Feedback / Dear John, look after my house and pet - IELTS letter [11]
Thank you very much for your feedback. It is very helpful for me to correct my writing.
Thank you very much for your feedback. It is very helpful for me to correct my writing.
rawbin
Jul 27, 2012
Writing Feedback / Dear John, look after my house and pet - IELTS letter [11]
Thank you everybody for such a valuable feedback. Do anybody have idea about the IELTS grade for this letter ?
Thank you everybody for such a valuable feedback. Do anybody have idea about the IELTS grade for this letter ?
rawbin
Jul 25, 2012
Writing Feedback / Dear John, look after my house and pet - IELTS letter [11]
Need Help:
I am appearing for IELTS test and need feedback about my writing. So, can you please provide some feedback.
A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
- give contact details for which you are away
- give instructions about how to care for your pet
- describe other household duties
Dear John,
I am so happy that you are ready to look after my house and pet while I am away on holiday for two weeks. In the case of emergency you can call me in the hotel where I am staying and the number is +610430919454. Else, you can even ring to my cousin Chris whose number is +977043092343.
One of the big black dog is having problem with the right leg so you need to give medicine and you can find it in the drawer of store room. And, others need shower after every two days, hope you won't mind doing it.
In the kitchen, there is a rubbish bag, which you need to put outside of the house as a result municipality can take it away on Monday morning. The other important thing is paying the electricity bill for the month of June. There is money on top of the fridge along with the electricity bill.
I really appreciate your help and co-operation.
Warm regards,
Merry Smith
Need Help:
I am appearing for IELTS test and need feedback about my writing. So, can you please provide some feedback.
A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
- give contact details for which you are away
- give instructions about how to care for your pet
- describe other household duties
Dear John,
I am so happy that you are ready to look after my house and pet while I am away on holiday for two weeks. In the case of emergency you can call me in the hotel where I am staying and the number is +610430919454. Else, you can even ring to my cousin Chris whose number is +977043092343.
One of the big black dog is having problem with the right leg so you need to give medicine and you can find it in the drawer of store room. And, others need shower after every two days, hope you won't mind doing it.
In the kitchen, there is a rubbish bag, which you need to put outside of the house as a result municipality can take it away on Monday morning. The other important thing is paying the electricity bill for the month of June. There is money on top of the fridge along with the electricity bill.
I really appreciate your help and co-operation.
Warm regards,
Merry Smith
