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Aug 14, 2012
Writing Feedback / People's reason for quit the countryside is logical [7]
[b]review my essay and give me critiques please.
The heavy traffic is a serious problem in big cities these days. So, the debate over possible solutions for decreasing people's eagerness on to use using their own cars is an interesting topic in many countries.
In spite of some belief that using private cars in crowded cities is inadvisable, many are of the opinion that it is not possible to leave their private car in their home. The thirst on for driving with one's own car in big cities has different reasons. One argument on in favor of using private cars is the lack of public transportation facilities. I mean vesting wasting time on waiting for buses or taxis is an important reason for why people use their own cars. A second common point supporting the eagerness on to use using private cars instead of buses or taxis is that bus or taxi stops are usually far from people's houses and they are not easy to access.
Although there are different reasons for prevention of people from using public transportation, there are a variety of ways to encourage people to decrease the usage use of their private cars. It could be claimed that an effective way to do this is increasing the number of buses, taxies, trains and etc. another way is to aware inform people about the disadvantageous disadvantages of using private cars such as heavy traffic and air pollution. As an example, the general health advertisements on Television is are an effective solution to achieve this aim.
In conclusion, based on that which has been said, I personally have come to believe that using private cars results in different problems and proposing methods to encourage citizens of large cities to use public transportation is so useful.
[b]review my essay and give me critiques please.
The heavy traffic is a serious problem in big cities these days. So, the debate over possible solutions for decreasing people's eagerness on to use using their own cars is an interesting topic in many countries.
In spite of some belief that using private cars in crowded cities is inadvisable, many are of the opinion that it is not possible to leave their private car in their home. The thirst on for driving with one's own car in big cities has different reasons. One argument on in favor of using private cars is the lack of public transportation facilities. I mean vesting wasting time on waiting for buses or taxis is an important reason for why people use their own cars. A second common point supporting the eagerness on to use using private cars instead of buses or taxis is that bus or taxi stops are usually far from people's houses and they are not easy to access.
Although there are different reasons for prevention of people from using public transportation, there are a variety of ways to encourage people to decrease the usage use of their private cars. It could be claimed that an effective way to do this is increasing the number of buses, taxies, trains and etc. another way is to aware inform people about the disadvantageous disadvantages of using private cars such as heavy traffic and air pollution. As an example, the general health advertisements on Television is are an effective solution to achieve this aim.
In conclusion, based on that which has been said, I personally have come to believe that using private cars results in different problems and proposing methods to encourage citizens of large cities to use public transportation is so useful.
