Writing Feedback / 'When becoming a professional person' - ielts [6]

When becoming professional person in any field natural or born talents and proper training are the two most important tools that person become success .Most people think natural talent is the most important factor but sometimes claimed that any person can be professional person due to proper training .

Firstly, born talents are very important advantage for any kid when he or she going to train it. Also for kids its easy to choose the path in there young age . Today's world have great sport person and musicians such as Roger Fedrer , Husan bolt who achieved this success in there career because of natural gifted ability .Fields like music is very important to have natural talent rather than training . Especially for the vocalist .AR Rahuman is the one of grate musician who became legend in his field because of his natural talent .

Secondly, rather than natural talent any children can become successful professional person through the proper training. Today's technology very advance in every area . Scientist use this new innovation for especially sports training .Those proper training help kids to develop there skills even they born as a normal kids . Most of the professional sports persons and musicians use these traing for maintain there peak performance level . Most parent train their kids in such a high tech facilities for future success of kids life .

In conclusions, it is true that have natural talents but more than natural talents very important to have proper training. Because today's world has new and advance technology . Through this technology and proper training child can become successful sports or musician in future even they born like Norman kids .

topic ;it is generally belive some people are born with certion talents for instant for music or sports and others are not ,however ,it is sometime claimed that any childern can be tought to become a good sports person or mucican .

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