yssefunc
Sep 2, 2012
Undergraduate / "Working at my father's real estate office" - My Princeton Summer Essay [6]
Hi,
I read your parapraph. I think it is good... However, i did not understand one sentence " we stayed for some weeks "... if you can search on the google, i do not find this sentences... I think you can write... ex: we stay in Seattle for 2 weeks...
Regards
Hi,
I read your parapraph. I think it is good... However, i did not understand one sentence " we stayed for some weeks "... if you can search on the google, i do not find this sentences... I think you can write... ex: we stay in Seattle for 2 weeks...
Regards