farnaz_nouri
Sep 4, 2012
Writing Feedback / I believe that teachers are responsible for motivating students to learn [2]
Do you agree with the statement or disagree? Use specific examples and support your points.
here is my essay, would you please help me about it?
From the first month of birth, every person has attitude to learn. For example, learn to eat, speak, play and so many other activities. Therefore, we need some body or some thing to motive us to learn better. I totally agree with this statement, and I believe that teachers are responsible for motivating students to learn in several reasons.
It is a fact that students spend most times in the schools where the teachers are responsible for what and how students learn, and the most important thing is to encourage them to learn. Students should enjoy studying and have definite aim for learning and doing their homework. I remember that I had a music teacher who was very wise and inspiring man. He played music very well and he always told us beautiful and effective stories. His wonderful stories and beautiful playing music cause me to play music 10 hours after the class.
Moreover, most of teachers are so experienced and educated people. In addition, because they encounter with lots of successful and unsuccessful individuals, they are responsible to guide the students and motive them to learn. Furthermore, they are responsible to illustrate the ways that help them to be prosperous by describing the story of these successful people.
Consequently, teachers are the best ones in order to motive the students to learn and finding their aims, because teachers are educated and experienced persons who spend most hours with students and this makes them to be responsible to encourage students to learn and study as more as possible.
Do you agree with the statement or disagree? Use specific examples and support your points.
here is my essay, would you please help me about it?
From the first month of birth, every person has attitude to learn. For example, learn to eat, speak, play and so many other activities. Therefore, we need some body or some thing to motive us to learn better. I totally agree with this statement, and I believe that teachers are responsible for motivating students to learn in several reasons.
It is a fact that students spend most times in the schools where the teachers are responsible for what and how students learn, and the most important thing is to encourage them to learn. Students should enjoy studying and have definite aim for learning and doing their homework. I remember that I had a music teacher who was very wise and inspiring man. He played music very well and he always told us beautiful and effective stories. His wonderful stories and beautiful playing music cause me to play music 10 hours after the class.
Moreover, most of teachers are so experienced and educated people. In addition, because they encounter with lots of successful and unsuccessful individuals, they are responsible to guide the students and motive them to learn. Furthermore, they are responsible to illustrate the ways that help them to be prosperous by describing the story of these successful people.
Consequently, teachers are the best ones in order to motive the students to learn and finding their aims, because teachers are educated and experienced persons who spend most hours with students and this makes them to be responsible to encourage students to learn and study as more as possible.
