DACula
Sep 9, 2012
Graduate / Rank/ Research/ Faculty members; SOP - MS Computer Science [6]
BLALJI
Some points on how you could change the sentences. Your grammar needs a lot of work. Overall the content is good though.
I HAVE always wondered how pictures of program from distant countries are represented perfectly....
Lucid is not a verb. Use some other word.
I PURSUED, not pursue
WORKING in projects like, NOT designing
helped me obtain hands-on experience in a professional environment.
My interest towards graphical visualization of signal processing MOTIVATED ME TO OPT FOR....
The "For me, the best way of getting relaxation..." line is weird. Change it.
BLALJI
Some points on how you could change the sentences. Your grammar needs a lot of work. Overall the content is good though.
I HAVE always wondered how pictures of program from distant countries are represented perfectly....
Lucid is not a verb. Use some other word.
I PURSUED, not pursue
WORKING in projects like, NOT designing
helped me obtain hands-on experience in a professional environment.
My interest towards graphical visualization of signal processing MOTIVATED ME TO OPT FOR....
The "For me, the best way of getting relaxation..." line is weird. Change it.