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DACula   
Sep 9, 2012
Graduate / Rank/ Research/ Faculty members; SOP - MS Computer Science [6]

BLALJI
Some points on how you could change the sentences. Your grammar needs a lot of work. Overall the content is good though.

I HAVE always wondered how pictures of program from distant countries are represented perfectly....

Lucid is not a verb. Use some other word.

I PURSUED, not pursue

WORKING in projects like, NOT designing

helped me obtain hands-on experience in a professional environment.

My interest towards graphical visualization of signal processing MOTIVATED ME TO OPT FOR....

The "For me, the best way of getting relaxation..." line is weird. Change it.
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