Undergraduate / Formal memo to introduce self, mainly on academic and career [2]

Comments:
There are some grammatical errors in this.
For example, ...and I'm forced to change it.... should be: and I was forced to change it
For example, ...interest in math and science lead me to a major ... should be: interest in math and science led me to a major

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