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Apr 1, 2009
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Mar 31, 2009
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For example, when writing a report to the principal to decide on an event to organise, then as the president of the student council, i must compare and contrast between three possible events outlisted and decide on one. How should I start the essay? Should I compare between the three points first or choose one to explain? Do i need to give both good and bad points for each event? How to conclude?
For example, when writing a report to the principal to decide on an event to organise, then as the president of the student council, i must compare and contrast between three possible events outlisted and decide on one. How should I start the essay? Should I compare between the three points first or choose one to explain? Do i need to give both good and bad points for each event? How to conclude?
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Jan 18, 2009
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Jan 16, 2009
Essays / "Confessions of a Student" [25]
Taking out topic sentences is what my teacher told me. Is there any way that i can score 100% for summary writing? I really can't figure out what can I take out from the passage when it comes to summary writing, some sentences i think that they may be related to the summary question but it's actually not.
Taking out topic sentences is what my teacher told me. Is there any way that i can score 100% for summary writing? I really can't figure out what can I take out from the passage when it comes to summary writing, some sentences i think that they may be related to the summary question but it's actually not.
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Jan 14, 2009
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Just want to ask, for summary writing, is it true that i should take out topic sentences from each paragraph?
Just want to ask, for summary writing, is it true that i should take out topic sentences from each paragraph?
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Jan 13, 2009
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Jan 11, 2009
Essays / "Confessions of a Student" [25]
How about this?
That beginning, was innocent in appearance, merely a bottle of my father's beer in order to calm myself before the big exam.
I remembered, my first drink, was an experiment introduced by a friend in a senior class. Drinking was meant as the last resort, you see. I was desperate to pass that exam, but hot that amber liquid metamorphasized into silk in my mouth, that seemed to relieve all the stress within me. And so, I continued drinking, one sip after another, and so on, in a rapid sequence.
The following day, my head was throbbing with an intense headache, and I couldn't see straight. During the test, I seemed to be unable to grasp hold of my concentration. My brain was totally blank, and nothing would come out of it. But nevertheless, I continued doing the test. Never did I expect my scholarly defeat when I received my test papers, I began to assuage my disappointment by indulging myself with my newfound pastime-drinking beer.
Upon reaching home, I headed straight to the wine cabinet, and took my father's bottle of whisky and went back to my room. For a couple of days, I tried to hide my addiction to alcohol from my parents. As my addiction worsened, one bottle of alcohol was needed to last me until the end of school each day. I covered the redness of my eyes with a mirrored sunglasses, in spite of the fact that I spend most of the day indoors.
It was the until my friends found out that I had been drinking alcohol and so did my parents. My father was very upset as I was addicted deeply to alcohol. Then, on a particular day, I was drinking beer, my friend spotted me and persuaded me not to drink anymore. Intoxicated, I gave my friend a punch and told him not to bother me. It was not long until my parents came and my father held me on the collar tightly. I remembered what he said to me, "Do you know what have you done? When can you come to your senses?"
Alcohol was all that was important. I believed this with my entire being until, foolishly, I went for a drive while I was still intoxicated. My car swerved through the streets until it came to a skidding halt at the feet of a girl no older than thirteen. She was profoundly frightened, shaking uncontrollably, but unhurt. After the police took their report, and my parents bailed me out for drink driving, I sat in my bedroom, tentatively dialing the number which I spoke with a counselor at least an hour, upon hanging up, i reached for my book of shakespeare, which i had neglected since the drinking began. Opening up to a page, I read these words: "O God, that men should put an enemy in their mouths to steal away their brains! That we should with joy, pleasance, revel, and applause transform ourselves into beast!"
How about this?
That beginning, was innocent in appearance, merely a bottle of my father's beer in order to calm myself before the big exam.
I remembered, my first drink, was an experiment introduced by a friend in a senior class. Drinking was meant as the last resort, you see. I was desperate to pass that exam, but hot that amber liquid metamorphasized into silk in my mouth, that seemed to relieve all the stress within me. And so, I continued drinking, one sip after another, and so on, in a rapid sequence.
The following day, my head was throbbing with an intense headache, and I couldn't see straight. During the test, I seemed to be unable to grasp hold of my concentration. My brain was totally blank, and nothing would come out of it. But nevertheless, I continued doing the test. Never did I expect my scholarly defeat when I received my test papers, I began to assuage my disappointment by indulging myself with my newfound pastime-drinking beer.
Upon reaching home, I headed straight to the wine cabinet, and took my father's bottle of whisky and went back to my room. For a couple of days, I tried to hide my addiction to alcohol from my parents. As my addiction worsened, one bottle of alcohol was needed to last me until the end of school each day. I covered the redness of my eyes with a mirrored sunglasses, in spite of the fact that I spend most of the day indoors.
It was the until my friends found out that I had been drinking alcohol and so did my parents. My father was very upset as I was addicted deeply to alcohol. Then, on a particular day, I was drinking beer, my friend spotted me and persuaded me not to drink anymore. Intoxicated, I gave my friend a punch and told him not to bother me. It was not long until my parents came and my father held me on the collar tightly. I remembered what he said to me, "Do you know what have you done? When can you come to your senses?"
Alcohol was all that was important. I believed this with my entire being until, foolishly, I went for a drive while I was still intoxicated. My car swerved through the streets until it came to a skidding halt at the feet of a girl no older than thirteen. She was profoundly frightened, shaking uncontrollably, but unhurt. After the police took their report, and my parents bailed me out for drink driving, I sat in my bedroom, tentatively dialing the number which I spoke with a counselor at least an hour, upon hanging up, i reached for my book of shakespeare, which i had neglected since the drinking began. Opening up to a page, I read these words: "O God, that men should put an enemy in their mouths to steal away their brains! That we should with joy, pleasance, revel, and applause transform ourselves into beast!"
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Jan 8, 2009
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This essay is supposed to be a serious one and i think it should be at least 500 words.
I need to write about the don'ts that students should not do, namely, smoking, pilfering, and many others. I couldn't think of what should I confess, maybe, I could just make it up. This is a class essay which was given by my teacher and other than these, I think there is no other additional information.
This essay is supposed to be a serious one and i think it should be at least 500 words.
I need to write about the don'ts that students should not do, namely, smoking, pilfering, and many others. I couldn't think of what should I confess, maybe, I could just make it up. This is a class essay which was given by my teacher and other than these, I think there is no other additional information.
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Jan 7, 2009
Essays / "Confessions of a Student" [25]
sorry but i m afraid that's all the information about that question hope that you can help me with it
sorry but i m afraid that's all the information about that question hope that you can help me with it
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Jan 7, 2009
Essays / "Confessions of a Student" [25]
What should i write for the introduction and how do i continue?
What should i write for the introduction and how do i continue?
