TamaraMarie
Oct 3, 2012
Essays / 'I could've done better' College Essay (My experience in high school) [8]
Is this for college admission or just course work?
Is this for college admission or just course work?
TamaraMarie
Oct 3, 2012
Essays / 'I could've done better' College Essay (My experience in high school) [8]
I would describe more about the high school in New York...maybe more details as to why the grade wasnt so important. For myself I know my social life played a huge part in "not caring" maybe its the same for you but describe that in more detail. Also expand more on the new school, maybe how the teachers are different.
Lol sorry for the random thoughts, I hope that helps ya a little.
I would describe more about the high school in New York...maybe more details as to why the grade wasnt so important. For myself I know my social life played a huge part in "not caring" maybe its the same for you but describe that in more detail. Also expand more on the new school, maybe how the teachers are different.
Lol sorry for the random thoughts, I hope that helps ya a little.
TamaraMarie
Sep 28, 2012
Essays / Comparison and contrast between two people you know - essay [8]
Comparison and Contrast essay about two people i know - narrowing down problem
Choosing two people and what to compare is more difficult than I thought it would be. I of course have many people in my life to choose from, but narrowing down on what I'm comparing is where I'm hitting a wall. Any suggestions to help me decide would be appreciated!
Comparison and Contrast essay about two people i know - narrowing down problem
Choosing two people and what to compare is more difficult than I thought it would be. I of course have many people in my life to choose from, but narrowing down on what I'm comparing is where I'm hitting a wall. Any suggestions to help me decide would be appreciated!