Bluwinda
Oct 17, 2012
Writing Feedback / 'Reducing the effort' - high salary or enjoyable job essay [5]
Hello ..I tried my best please do help me too okk. I changed quite alot of parts please do improve it ok .I
It is undoubtedly true that money is the integral source of our modern society.Majority of the people believe that getting a high salary is the most crucial aspect of job but not everyone have the same perspective.Some people prefer to do jobs that they enjoy doing instead of seeing the amount of salary but both views has it's pros and cons
There are plausible reasons why people look for jobs that offer a good salary.Firstly ,the undeniable fact is that life for those who earn a huge amount of money are able to fulfill their desires without any hesitations of whether they are able to afford it or not.A well paid job obviously enable the person to live a luxurious life with a huge and beautiful house with good interiors and modern facilities like good kitchen appliances and latest cars .
However, life is not all that good with a high pay .For example My neighbor earns a quite huge amount of money.He is able to fulfill his family's desires like having a meal in a high class restaurant and sending his children to a international school Life is not all about a extravagant living right .There is a saying that time is money.My neighbor rarely spend time with his family .he does not even have the opportunity to cherish precious time with his family this could be a trigger to family problems and happiness would be at stake ( u could add this point too if you want )
Besides some people like a career that the enjoy because they claim that money does not bring them happiness,whereas a job that they could have fun makes their life a elated one .When a person enjoys their work they tend
to use their heart and soul to focus on their work,leading to a enhancement of performance level.Moreover a successful career brings a emotional satisfaction to the worker and it benefits the employer
In conclusion I personally inclined to agree with the second view as I fell that a enjoyable job would both provide a person with happiness and confidence to work hard and earn a good amount of salary. ( You have to add in why you do not prefer the job with the high salary)
For example you can say that it would cause depression and it be the downfall of the worker
...ok I tried my best to help you please help me too ok .I hope it benefits you :) good luck
Hello ..I tried my best please do help me too okk. I changed quite alot of parts please do improve it ok .I
It is undoubtedly true that money is the integral source of our modern society.Majority of the people believe that getting a high salary is the most crucial aspect of job but not everyone have the same perspective.Some people prefer to do jobs that they enjoy doing instead of seeing the amount of salary but both views has it's pros and cons
There are plausible reasons why people look for jobs that offer a good salary.Firstly ,the undeniable fact is that life for those who earn a huge amount of money are able to fulfill their desires without any hesitations of whether they are able to afford it or not.A well paid job obviously enable the person to live a luxurious life with a huge and beautiful house with good interiors and modern facilities like good kitchen appliances and latest cars .
However, life is not all that good with a high pay .For example My neighbor earns a quite huge amount of money.He is able to fulfill his family's desires like having a meal in a high class restaurant and sending his children to a international school Life is not all about a extravagant living right .There is a saying that time is money.My neighbor rarely spend time with his family .he does not even have the opportunity to cherish precious time with his family this could be a trigger to family problems and happiness would be at stake ( u could add this point too if you want )
Besides some people like a career that the enjoy because they claim that money does not bring them happiness,whereas a job that they could have fun makes their life a elated one .When a person enjoys their work they tend
to use their heart and soul to focus on their work,leading to a enhancement of performance level.Moreover a successful career brings a emotional satisfaction to the worker and it benefits the employer
In conclusion I personally inclined to agree with the second view as I fell that a enjoyable job would both provide a person with happiness and confidence to work hard and earn a good amount of salary. ( You have to add in why you do not prefer the job with the high salary)
For example you can say that it would cause depression and it be the downfall of the worker
...ok I tried my best to help you please help me too ok .I hope it benefits you :) good luck