Undergraduate / highest quality of education; U Chicago/ How UChicago satisfy you? [2]

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How does the University of Chicago, as you know it now, satisfy your desire for a particular kind of learning, community, and future? Please address with some specificity your own wishes and how they relate to UChicago.

University of Chicago's motto "Crescat scientia; vita excolatur," is what I have been pursuing in my life. As the motto suggests, UC is committed to enrich the society with its highest quality of education.

UC provides everything to drive all students deeper into learning. Besides the faculty of world-leading scholars, UC adds its perfection with its magnificent library system which provide seven million volumes of valuable academic materials for farther research and study. The Joe and Rika Mansueto Library thrills me and makes me promise myself to delve into books and scholarly resources in the center of Chicago, in the center of the world.

Unlike other colleges that tend to belittle the study of history, UC has been a leader university in the field of history since the beginning. The fact that UC offers research grants to history students is only a small part of what it has to offer. The history department, associated closely with PRISM, provides numerous workshops and leads students to explore history outside of classrooms. Furthermore the internship programs of the UC offer students broader opportunities to explore history as their interests. It thrills me when I imagine my being part of recording history, by developing the Children's Gallery at the Chicago History Museum, documenting oral histories, and preparing online exhibitions. The location of UC in Chicago adds many opportunities to the historical students; however UC does not limit themselves in the area of Chicago. UC's civilization studies programs, located in all around the world, give the real taste and analysis of historical development. Finally I think that UC's unCommon application demonstrates that it inspires the students to think deeper in the midst of rapidly changing, and shallow society.

The UC and my past are closely intermingled together. Chicago was the first United States I experienced that I bypassed. As I walked the Chicago airport, I was completely overwhelmed by virtually everything. I had to confront myself who looked smaller than ever, and the future adversities that were waiting for me and my family. Two years from then I dream myself walking in the street of Chicago as a confident student of University of Chicago, committed to grow more knowledge, deeper than ever.

Undergraduate / common app education interruption [3]

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The common app ask to explain the details of my education interruption.
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common app education interruption

If your progression through secondary school was or will be delayed or interrupted in any way, please check all that apply.
did not/will not graduate
did/will graduate early
did/will graduate late
did/will change secondary schools
did/will take time off
did/will take gap year
did/will receive GED

Provide details on the item(s) checked above.

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I decided to graduate a semester early to earn time to prepare more for the rigorous college works.
Beginning on January 19th to middle of May, I am planning to take college courses, less than 12 credits hours, in order to apply as a freshman applicant in the nearby community college.

-Introduction to Physical Anthropology (3credits)
-American History I (3credits)
-Honors College Composition I (3credits)
* The community college does not offer Honors classes for Anthropology and American History.

For the AP classes I took in the first semester of senior year, I will study the second semester materials by myself and take the tests on May.

Plus because I do not want to miss the opportunity to study Latin, I will pay for using the Cambridge Latin Course website to continue studying Latin Unit 5.

Also I will continue doing my extracurricular activities and do more volunteering work and find a job to help my parents and as well as to experience more broadly.