Chicken
Oct 24, 2012
Writing Feedback / IELTS TASK2 Pros and cons of building nuclear power plants [4]
In my opinion, the very first thing is that you'd better write more (IELTS Task 2 essay requires at least 250 words). Another important thing, I think, is that you should revise your essay structure, by equally redistribute your ideas into each paragraph. You may need to make an outline, in which you state clearly which are your main ideas and what are supporting ideas for them. One more thing, you'd better check your spelling carefully. :) Have a nice day!
In my opinion, the very first thing is that you'd better write more (IELTS Task 2 essay requires at least 250 words). Another important thing, I think, is that you should revise your essay structure, by equally redistribute your ideas into each paragraph. You may need to make an outline, in which you state clearly which are your main ideas and what are supporting ideas for them. One more thing, you'd better check your spelling carefully. :) Have a nice day!
