Writing Feedback / 'You helped America' - Patriots Pen-TELL MY FOUNDING FATHERS [9]

Hi! in this competition there is a minimum of 300 words its maximum is 400 but I would recomend you to add a little bit more detail to it and as my teacher said its not about how things have changed its how your giving thanks to them for what they have done maybe you could change the presidential debates paragraph for a paragraph about how you give thanks to them forthe declaration of independence and all other great things they've done :) No neeed to thank mee!