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Nov 2, 2013
Writing Feedback / The past 20 years have seen a considerable increase of international tourism. [9]
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Recent years, it has seen a considerable increase of international tourism. There is a highly controversial whether its popular demand brings advantage or drawback trend. In my opinion, everything has two sides and this problem is not an exception.
On the one hand, it is an undeniable fact that international tourism has significant benefits, especially in term economic development and promoting cultural understanding. Indeed, tourism is a key element that could boost economy for the host nation. Take a good illustration, when tourism flourishes, it creates a necessary for upgrading infrastructure such as hotels, roads, means of transport, facilities, which leads to generate numerous employment opportunities for the local people. In addition, thanks to tourism, culture exchange and presenting local to the rest of world is easier. It also contributes a massive parts to bridge the gap between different cultures, as a result relationship between countries is more friendly; and people have more chance to enrich their knowledge.
On the other hand, there are some negative aspects due to tourism. Beautiful landscapes have been absorbing a great number of adventurers this will cause the environmental degradation by rubbish like plastic bottle, nylon bags, waste of foods. Furthermore, global tourism puts high pressure on such local resource as the demand of foods from travelers, the deforestation for building village. Consequently, it triggers to ecosystem imbalance as well as threaten habitat of wild animals.
By way of conclusion, I firmly believe that international tourism need to be seen from both aspects. Therefore, the government should find the right balance between beneficial tourism and its negative impact.
After your comments, I rewrite this essay. Hopelessly, receive useful comments from you guys. Thank you again.
Recent years, it has seen a considerable increase of international tourism. There is a highly controversial whether its popular demand brings advantage or drawback trend. In my opinion, everything has two sides and this problem is not an exception.
On the one hand, it is an undeniable fact that international tourism has significant benefits, especially in term economic development and promoting cultural understanding. Indeed, tourism is a key element that could boost economy for the host nation. Take a good illustration, when tourism flourishes, it creates a necessary for upgrading infrastructure such as hotels, roads, means of transport, facilities, which leads to generate numerous employment opportunities for the local people. In addition, thanks to tourism, culture exchange and presenting local to the rest of world is easier. It also contributes a massive parts to bridge the gap between different cultures, as a result relationship between countries is more friendly; and people have more chance to enrich their knowledge.
On the other hand, there are some negative aspects due to tourism. Beautiful landscapes have been absorbing a great number of adventurers this will cause the environmental degradation by rubbish like plastic bottle, nylon bags, waste of foods. Furthermore, global tourism puts high pressure on such local resource as the demand of foods from travelers, the deforestation for building village. Consequently, it triggers to ecosystem imbalance as well as threaten habitat of wild animals.
By way of conclusion, I firmly believe that international tourism need to be seen from both aspects. Therefore, the government should find the right balance between beneficial tourism and its negative impact.
